The Dream That Sparkled (poem)

Remember the dream that sparkled so

We pledged our love and never let go

Then we were so young what did we know

Of world without care outside our glow

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So lost in our love what did we care

So much to give and so much to share

So many hopes awaited us there

So time did test how much we could bear

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Soon we found out that love can hurt so

Confusion and doubt had much to share

To bruise and tear at what remained there

Yet in the bleak night there was a glow

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We spouted out words without a care

A chance to cause pain we let it go

And what about love we didn’t know

Beyond this kiss how much could we bear

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Somehow we found our forgotten glow

Were we that couple we used to know

What happened to them where did they go

Remember the dream that sparkled so

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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter99,

MH, beautiful poem buddy!

"Somehow we found our forgotten glow

Were we that couple we used to know

What happened to them where did they go

Remember the dream that sparkled so"

Awesome ending MH, I loved it! :)


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Mh -

You just keep getting better and better!

The changes a relationship goes thru can strengthen or destroy. I see much of my own in the words you present.

Great Job! Up & Awesome!


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TToombs08 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

Nice job. By the title, I thought it was going to be another tribute to those Twilight books/movies. :)


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Very nice indeed, a little sad though. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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bac2basics 4 years ago from Spain

Hi MH. I love the title and what a great poem of young love going bad and then maturing. Dreams really do sparkle...fantastic.


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Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

Voted UP and Awesome!!! Well done, I think many in long relationships can definitely relate to this poem!!


Janhorner 4 years ago

Loved this poem! The final image is fabulous and reflects the lovely words.

Jan


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thelyricwriter 4 years ago from West Virginia

Great poem! This poem is true. Even for those who still love one another, it is so true. I wonder this myself at times. Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.


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christin53 4 years ago from UK

This is my kind of poem it's beautiful :)


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dghbrh 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

The way you ended the poem...its awesome. well done, all votes here.


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Aww..... So true, sometimes! Beautiful poem, enjoyed reading it!

Awesome......


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

You are still sparkling so... awesome!!


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

An awesome description of how love goes sometimes. Vote way up


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

A "glowing" poem and a great song - thoroughly enjoyed both!

Voted up!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

So easily related to. A fine job, as usual.


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

We all have that 'dream that sparkles', don't we? Sigh..


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shelpeare 4 years ago

Beautifully written!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. So lovely. Passing this on.


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travmaj 4 years ago from australia

this is really evocative - dreams and time passing - good poem

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