The Execution (limerick)

Some say that the girl had gone mad

She lost every brain that she had

Where were senses buried

When sentence was carried

The dark day she married that cad


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eHealer 4 years ago from Las Vegas

Mhatter, great limerick! Where did you get that photo?! You are amazing! loved it!


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

I don't know how you do this every day! I might be able to do one of these once a week, if someone put a gun to my head. Excellent as always!


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Nellieanna 4 years ago from TEXAS

This has a deep message & lesson imbedded in it, Peter! whew! Excellent!


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epigramman 4 years ago

.....you are the king of the limerick and perfection in the economy of the choice in your words - wise one!

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Well the fish in the lake are wearing earplugs ......


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Whoa! You really know how to mix the words with the pictures.


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Curiad 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

Laughs, you do really have a way with these!


Sueswan 4 years ago

Your words and the picture are a perfect match.

Voted up and awesome


Valleypoet 4 years ago

Great limerick, and the picture fits perfectly. Voted up


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lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

Voted up and shared!


Sunnie Day 4 years ago

Deep thoughts that go so well with this picture... A cad is an understatement! Great visual with words to back it up..

Thank you.

Sunnie


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

great limerick as usual Mhatter.


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btrbell 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Funny! How did you find the perfect picture?!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Master of Limericks..Loved it..


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SommerDalton 4 years ago

Voted up and awesome!


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

I wonder if you dream in limericks! Good one!!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Oh, now that's intense.


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

I'm never disappointed when i read one of your limerick !

Well done and awesome !


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thost 4 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

Very good, it reminds me of an old friend.


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Mh -

As time passed by hours to days

girl viewed the errors of his ways

divorced his tail

now free to sail

with alimony he still pays.

Great job, my friend! Enjoyed!


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PHILLYDREAMER 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

Wow! Now he truly is a player.


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

MEN!

WOMEN!!

geez...

it always interests me - why is HE the only cad? isn't that bitch her best friend?

hmmmmm?...

great limerick, M!


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MargaritaEden 4 years ago from Oregon

good one :)


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Simply sublime.


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Redberry Sky 4 years ago

I love the limericks you write - especially the ones with darker undertones ... :)


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

The sneak...

Good one.

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