The Final Frontier (limerick)

Thus astronaut challenged his peers

This exploration could take years

And what will it mean

This knowledge we’ll glean

From space between teenager’s ears


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Good Evening Mhatter - LOL this is awesome too. You are on a roll, as always with the great writing. This is very clever and hilarious. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

The emptiness of space is vast

his mastery of thought comes last

cell phone in hand

cloud player land

his future's as dim as his past.

Nice one, my friend! Enjoyed!


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

rcrumple - good one too! LOL. In His Love, Faith Reaper

Sorry for the interjection Mh.


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

The Final Frontier....or....is there life on that planet?


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

The space between teenage's ear?


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

@Billy: Or, 'Is there life on Earth?', lol

Good one, MH! Always enjoy your work..... Awesome!


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

I don't find teenagers easy to understand either, Hatter, especially these days...funny as usual and well put!!


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Lady_E 4 years ago from London, UK

Very unique Limerick. I enjoyed it.


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

I think this one could have been just as relevant when I was a teenager.Fun!!


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Mhatter

"From space between teenager’s ears" LOL

Voted up into space.

Take care :)


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Good one Mhatter, you're on a roll..Hee


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

Mhatter this made me laugh out loud for quite a long time. Thank You. Jamie


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teaches12345 4 years ago

Space the final frontier - teens and their listening ability. Very funny and witty!


LikaMarie 4 years ago

Love the twist of the teen mind at the end... And here we were led to think "Star Trek"... And how true, that the teenage mind, while constantly at work, can check out into the black hole at times, where info is lost....


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

between teenager's ear...well said about mobile era kids and their abilities !.....brainy poetry!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Good one know some teens with space where it shouldn't be. lol


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

Space...the final frontier! These days, teenagers are floating around earth as if there was nothing but space between their ears..lol..


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molometer 4 years ago

Very nicely done.

From space between teenager’s ears lol

Funny and true.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Space is right. That is not the final frontier, luckily.


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Good one, M. I wonder what some teenagers are thinking. Of course, some of them aren't!

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