The Forbidden Fruit (limerick)

The husband’s tale became unhidden

When he ate of the fruit forbidden

From Eden he’d sail

As heaven did hail

As his butt was tail that was ridden


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

LOL so funny.I like that kick.I think he deserves it haha


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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

Great one with a pic most perfect...

Kim


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

I just knew that MAN was really the problem in Eden.

Poor Eve had to take all the heat from that little fiasco! LOL


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

LOL.....that man has problems.


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Elias Zanetti 3 years ago from Athens, Greece

Ha ha! Great pic and funny poem!


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

I'm not surprised that it happened so fast.

All their friends had said that it wouldn't last!


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Funny! And however do you find such great images??


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Very funny.


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

hahaha Yes, I wonder if the "I do" had been said ...


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Hilarious!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

That was amusing indeed. Some men don't think before they act.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

I guess me made a wrong turn, eh?

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