The Girl Really Was Striking (limerick)

So late when he picked up his date

Poor reasons for making her wait

To all of her woes

Said that’s how it goes

A punch in the nose was his fate

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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

He deserved the punch. voted up and funny.


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

LOL Love it! (still giggling)


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

Hahaha,.... seen one of my friends there... am humorously nostalgic.. haha


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

A very nice limerick !


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Sunshine625 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

Haha!! Funny and ouch for him!!


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mollymeadows 4 years ago from The Shire

Mhat, I've had a few late dates who would've benefited from a nice solid chop to the schnoz. Funny man!

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