The Great Pain Reliever (limerick)

Saw doctor to help ease my pain

So constant it drove me insane

My brain he did stir

To make pain defer

Just listen to her he’d explain


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Tuatha 3 years ago from Fayetteville, NC

I actually get this. She is lucky one listens. Thanks!


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Very wise to do so ... in heading off that pain : )


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ashelladyhawke 3 years ago from California

Short and to the point as usual. Very nice. Thumbs up.


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FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

Listening definitely makes things easier. She won't have to repeat things so often.


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annart 3 years ago from SW England

Ouch! Good one; hope he listens well and gives the right responses! Well done.


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Thanks for the morning laugh.


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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

What a smart doctor-smiles

Kim


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

No doubt about it. Listen more and less pain...I learned and this guy will too. LOL


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

That doctor you saw is a very wise fellow,

His wife is lucky with a marriage so mellow.


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

There is little doubt that men should be give a to-do booklet and a

what not to-do booklet.

It would make life much less complicated! He, he!!

Wonderful limerick, my friend.

DJ.


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MsDora 3 years ago from The Caribbean

Wise doctor, eh?


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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

Pretty funny. Jamie


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azrestoexp 3 years ago

Enjoyed. So much wisdom in so few words.


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Clever doctor? Wonder if he took the advice?


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Words to live by!


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nighthag 3 years ago from Australia

Such fun

Have to share it on :)


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

That should make the headache go away. lol


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

you already have unlimited limericks to share your avid readers!


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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

wonderful piece of writing.


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LadyFiddler 3 years ago from Somewhere in the West

LOL ha ha ha that doctor is giving great advice ha ha ha.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Transferred from one pain to another. So amusing.

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