The Hero (poem)

A rhyme of a youth we once knew

Who enjoyed unique points of view

He dreamt of a world which was new

Which blossomed in his special hue

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As he aged his wonderment grew

He displayed his talents so true

To shadows which he couldn’t see

His visions for me and for you

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Soon to his side volunteers flew

But with them flowed dark destiny

His actions were no longer free

He pondered just what would he do

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It seemed one more victim he’ll be

To world of mediocrity

To age another victory

This hero of ours is he through

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But there through the darkest of night

Dawns fresh new expressions of light

Yet oddly familiar this sight

This stranger who bears hero’s fight

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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States

Mhatter, if we looked into a mirror we might just see this hero you speak of, yet we will never admit this.whonu


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lrc7815 3 years ago from Central Virginia

Another great write MH.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Good poetry and thanks for sharing your talent with us


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Pamela99 3 years ago from United States

This is another wonderfully unique poem that I enjoyed very much.


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Alastar Packer 3 years ago from North Carolina

A poem to ponder on Mhatter. Unique and interesting.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful, So many heroes are gone...


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Debby Bruck 3 years ago

Who was this hero and what did he do?


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Awesome poem giving all heroes a great tribute and really fantastic video just right.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Martin, your heart and love of those who are true is what draws me to your poetry. You got it goin' on my friend!


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Martin.. everyone looks at this poem different

this reminds me of my father.. He is a hero.. he was in Korea on pork chop hill when i was a baby and two tours of Vietnam front lines.. it is so beautiful

God Bless you

Merry Christmas

Debbie


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Martin I am sharing I love this poem

Debbie


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AudreyHowitt 3 years ago from California

We see heroes in our every day lives I think--but this feels like the inner journey of a hero--of the vision, and light that burns for one such--evocative write---

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