The Hypnotist’s Show (limerick)

I went to a hypnotist’s show

And golly I loved it all so

He gave us a tour

Of mind insecure

His show now I’m sure I don’t know


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Mh -

I think the illusion picture has hypnotized all who follow into giving you thumbs up and positive comments. It's working! Great Job!


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Life can sure be confusing sometimes! As usual, I laughed!


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Ha. Very clever. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Funny.. your picture got me spell-bound and in a daze.


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rebeccamealey 4 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

What a cute limerick! It speaks volumes, especially with the cute illustration you chose!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

That was a great limerick, and an apt picture. Excellent work.


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lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

A great touch for the end of my day. Got a wonderful chuckle from this little limerick.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Wonderful. That pic got me dizzy and cross eyed. lol


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Go on... you can tell us, what did he make you do? :) Nicely done as always.


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Glimmer Twin Fan 4 years ago

I can always go on hubpages and pull up one of your limericks for a great laugh. Thanks!


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

I agree with Tobusiness there. What did that Hypnotist make you do? Oh dear!! Great limerick as always, Hatter.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

HaHa, Another funny mind puzzle...


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Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

LOL...Too Funny!!! I enjoy reading your cleverly worded limericks!!!!


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco Author

For those wondering what hypnotist made me do: see "The Stripper".


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pstraubie48 4 years ago from sunny Florida

MHatter..loved this. Lots of meaning packed into few words. Less is more often, isn't it?

Have you really been to one? I have and it was not successful. I couldn't let go. I guess I was too much of a control freak at the time...this was 25 years ago. Maybe I should try again.


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Boy, if you stare at that picture long enough, you will get hypnotized! Good limerick.

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