The Kiss (limerick)

A kiss from this Miss made room spin

Some say I awoke with a grin

For somehow she missed

The point of my gist

And kiss of her fist blessed my chin


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dghbrh 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

LOL....its real funny and what can be the best way to start the day with......thanks for sharing this one and I am sharing it too.


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

You have mastered the limerick my friend! Excellent!


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midget38 3 years ago from Singapore

Ow!!! Poor guy!! ;)


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

It is early early and here I am beginning my day with a smile...thank you, MH...for the smiles...

Have a lovely lovely day.

Sending Angels to you, dear Friend. :) ps


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

You come up with the silliest stuff. Funny.


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Genna East 3 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

Ouch! :-) Very funny and endearing at the same time. You are quite good at this!


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

so funny.. you got to be careful who you kiss..

hugs

debbie


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

You got it right on the kisser as you were out of line!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Ouch painful way to get back to reality.


Ghost32 3 years ago

Sounds like you've met my wife...:)


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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

You got it in the "kisser", just not the way you thought it would be!!!!

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