The Kiss (poem)

Imagine streams

Of golden dreams

Much more there it seems

A promise that gleams

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Imagine eyes

Rich with surprise

Much more than mere dreams

This land fraught with sighs

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Add on a heart

Racing in streams

Through lands of surprise

Where love has its start

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Finally kiss

Paradise gleams

Reality sighs

While love claims their heart

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And so it seems

It had its start

A dream of a kiss

Deep within her eyes


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suzettenaples 4 years ago from Taos, NM

Oh, this sonnet is gorgeous and makes me weep! The beauty of your words and images just astounds me. You are as good as Shakespeare here with this sonnet. I think it is one of the most beautiful sonnets I have ever read. Please put together a book of your sonnets.


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Lucky Cats 4 years ago from The beautiful Napa Valley, California

Mhatter....I love your poems about love, "romance," and intimacy ... specially from a male perspective. You speak of the nuances, subtlety, surprise, excitation and delight of discovering another human being....a unique, individual and thoroughly personal, private and exhilerating experience. The magic of joy and celebration which you seem to understand in the shraring of oneself with another is very very pleasing...which makes the entire exchange pleasing, as well. wonderful! Up Awesome Beautiful Useful and Stirring.


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

Congratulations on a sonnet well done. Thank you for sharing. jamie


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elle64 4 years ago from Scandinavia

Beautiful written- thanks


mackyi 4 years ago

Mhatter99, I sincerely admire your gift for writing poetry. Thanks for sharing another beautiful poem. Voted up!


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Glimmer Twin Fan 4 years ago

Your poetry and limericks are awesome. I'm always amazed at how you do this time after time.


ExoticHippieQueen 4 years ago

Love it, and the words just flow effortlessly in their proper place.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful and i loved the video..Bravo..


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travmaj 4 years ago from australia

This is lovely as usual - I particularly like the opening lines, drawing the reader in... it is amazing how your words flow.


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suzettenaples 4 years ago from Taos, NM

Well, it would be good if I could count the lines and the rhymes in this poem. I called it a sonnet, which it is not, but at least a great lyrical poem. Nevertheless, the poem is beautiful and so full of emotion.


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teaches12345 4 years ago

This has some passion to it and the video music really really hits the target. Johnny Depp and Angelina in The Tourist really made it for me! Great job on the poetic kiss.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Just beautiful and so very romantic. Passing this on.


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Mama Kim 8 4 years ago

Aw your such a romantic ^_^ I love your poems, funny or romantic, you are a fantastic writer! Voted up and beautiful!!

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