The Now True Believer (limerick)

The thief had made one big mistake

When from a church money did make

For somewhere in time

Came justice sublime

When His notice crime did awake


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

You never disappoint!


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter99,

Good one buddy!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Subtle but always sublime, like the old sage at the top said, ' you never disappoint'.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

Hahaha You always got new ideas!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Superb!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Another good one..Crime never pays..


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Bravo my friend!


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

you did it again..bravo!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Crime never has and never will pay.


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

A lesson in life! Sooner or later, you gotta pay the piper!

Completely enjoyed!


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Good one!


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stars439 4 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

Brilliant ! God Bless You.

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