The Promise Of Dawn (limerick)

The end of the tunnel was plain

Could see light without any strain

The promise of dawn

When problems are gone

Was met by an oncoming train


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Vellur 14 months ago from Dubai

That is sad; just when things were going to be okay the stupid train comes rolling along. Nicely done.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 14 months ago from Riga, Latvia

And the train spoils all the fun.

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