The Question (poem)

Not just a sonnet



Be all my dreams come true for this one day

Endue your faithful heart this grand bequest

Make all my mind-swept worries drift away

Your servant hopes you’ll heed a soul’s request

Vain thoughts perhaps are these within my head

Adrift in wish that you’ll say yes to me

Let me announce my plea from knees instead

Entombed consumed till words will set me free

No other care is drifting in the air

The world awaits the song upon your lips

Intense the silent sound heard everywhere

Not ever had I known how slow time slips

Each fiber which is me in this resigns

So say that you will be my Valentines

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Oh, what a lovely poem of love for the upcoming Valentine's Day, and the anticipation it brings in hoping of the answer . . . YES!!! I love the very lovely bouquet of roses---nice touch!

I remember back in early school days, when we would get that note passed to us to check either, "yes" or "no" to be his Valentine . . . it was always such a difficult decision.

Voted up +++ and sharing

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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Vellur 3 years ago from Dubai

A beautiful Valentine's Day poem. Voted up and shared.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

What a wonderful request made in such a beautiful way.


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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

It is a sonnet, a beautiful, meaningful and oh so romantic sonnet. Love the roses also. Best to you both...


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travel_man1971 3 years ago from Bicol, Philippines

A very timely poem for the coming Heart's Day. Voted up and shared!


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Jools99 3 years ago from North-East UK

Beautiful sonnet - I hope your special lady has this handwritten in her card?


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Shoot, Martin! If you didn't already have a valentine, I'd say YES!


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Quoteslover 3 years ago

A really beautiful poem


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thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

Well done Martin, old Will could not hold a candle to this sonnet. Vote up.


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AliciaC 3 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

This is a beautiful poem, and the photo and video are beautiful too! What a lovely tribute to Valentine's Day.


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AudreyHowitt 3 years ago from California

You romantic you! Great choice for the video too!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

A lovely and romantic poem. Real nice for Valentine's.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Beautifully thought of


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

Simply beautiful....


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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

This flows so beautifully from beginning to end. Jamie


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acaetnna 3 years ago from Guildford

Oh wow - beautiful. Just my type of poem!


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

BEAUTIFUL MY DEAR FRIEND


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Oh so wonerful Martin as always.

Enjoy your day.

Eddy.

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