The Quiet Promise (poem)

Familiar the voice which then called to me

And calmed me back that dark and lonely night

Across the quiet promise of the sea

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The day was done my soul sought harmony

Sweet rest the goal that now I had in sight

Familiar the voice which then called to me

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I waited for my dreams to set me free

And once again to bless me with their flight

Across the quiet promise of the sea

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When far away tide sparked my memory

This now distant star which was my delight

Familiar the voice which then called to me

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My tears sought reasons to this destiny

That my love should wait now far out of sight

Across the quiet promise of the sea

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I then closed my eyes to all that must be

A stranger was there whose arms held me tight

Familiar the voice which then called to me

Across the quiet promise of the sea


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epigramman 4 years ago

hubawesome and yes it's a title I wish I had written and the words which follow live right up to it.

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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Beautifully written and excellent choice of video/audio accompaniment. Very calming.

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anglnwu 4 years ago

The longing in this poem is evident--thanks for sharing.


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snakeslane 4 years ago from Canada

nice villanelle Mhatter, the musical interlude is enjoyable too, i hope they live happily ever after by the sea. regards, snakeslane


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suzettenaples 4 years ago from Taos, NM

Beautiful poem and especially the photos. Well done!


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

I find villanelle a great achievement, trying to find the perfect repetitive line, you did this so well. My favorite poem is Theodore Roethke "My Papa's Waltz" another great writer of villianelle. Jamie


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uzma shaheen 4 years ago from Lahore,Pakistan

poem and picture, both are beautiful.


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pstraubie48 4 years ago from sunny Florida

'the quiet promise of the sea' held the secret that was awaited....some poems i get lost in but this one became a part of me. Lovely, lovely.Voted beautiful and pinned.


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watergeek 4 years ago

OK. I'm gonna be the dumb one and ask, "What's villianelle?" I know it's a poetic style, but what characterizes it?

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