The Rose (poem)

My fiery rose please listen to my heart

And take its message to the one I love

Restore some meaning to this time apart

Then whisper to her what we’re dreaming of


I’m trusting you to help restore her smile

For in the night I’m sure she feels like I

May your scent transform her lonely while

Then whisper of a love which will not die


And when at last your luster has to fade

And you have done your best some pain to hide

And all the doubt that you helped to dissuade

Then whisper that I’ll soon be at her side


Until that time and in this time we miss

Then whisper to my love this special kiss

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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Oh just one kiss.. for your love.. you are so romantic.. what a wonderful poet you are

I really love this one..


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eHealer 4 years ago from Las Vegas

You just slay me Mhatter! Beautiful poem and Josh Groban, all I need is a Pink Lady (drink) and my favorite Bon-Bons! Thanks Mhatter!

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drbj 4 years ago from south Florida

Very tender, very sweet, and Josh's serenade is a perfect accompaniment, Mhatter.

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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Beautiful poem and video, well done !

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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

You write beautiful poetry.Bravo!

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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Never has a rose been more beautifully written about. I so admire your poetic creativity and always enjoy engrossing myself in it.

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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Superb! Awesome and up. I liked the subject and how the meaning projected from it.

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CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

Beautiful words plus Josh Groban! Awesomeness!

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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

marvellous! ....words and video complementing each other perfectly!

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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Just beautiful and romantic.

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Janhorner 4 years ago

Love this poem. The rose and the whisper simply brilliant, voted up.


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btrbell 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Lovely! I love the first 2 lines especially. The message much more powerful than the vessel!

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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Mh, another one I missed for whatever reason. Love this ---so beautiful and the video is most excellent. Nice. Voted up, awesome and beautiful.

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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