The Secret In The Wind (poem)

A wind so soft

Blew across a lovely field

Bearing with it a scent

An ember of a memory

Come with me Come with me


And every flower every tree

Shivered with excitement

Drifting there within the wind

Of a world which use to be

Come with me Come with me


The hope and glow

Which flowed in time to warm that day

Renewed the promise of youth

Which a kiss of a scent set free

Come with me Come with me


Here touched by thrills

Sweet moments passed

Such glory blessed the field

Such blossoms were reborn

Such unity was formed


Yet mid their Joy came dew

The sparkle of their light

The rainbow of these days

Scents now familiar

Bound for forever


So to the wind

They seasoned the scent with refrain

Which flows across other fields

Whispers once hoping to see

Come with me Come with me

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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

You have such a way of taking people along with you. I could hear the secret whispered in the wind. Beautiful!

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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

I love the wisp of Nature in this poem. The photo and video are nice touches.

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Yes, very beautifully done here those whispers in the wind.

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Michele Travis 3 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

I wish I could tell you how much your poems effect my emotions. You are such a wonderful poet.

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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Beautiful is not the word for this.. maybe awesome and beautiful mixed together.. I can feel the wind my friend..



I wish I could give you a rose for this beauty

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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Such a soothing effect, listening to the wind...Beautiful!

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DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Oh, you have outdone yourself on this one.

An ethereal beauty flows effortlessly through

you words. I really enjoyed it.

Great job, Martin!


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Good poem with a lovely touch of describing the wind chills

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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Very beautifully done my friend !

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ladydeonne 3 years ago from Florence, SC

You are a master at toying with the motions. I was totally swept up in the moment and for a time went to another place. Thank you for taking me along. The video added an hypnotic touch.....

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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

If we listen we can hear those whispers in the wind....lovely, enchanting..dear Martin...

Angels are on the way ps

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Vellur 3 years ago from Dubai

A beautiful poem about the wind,the wind holds many wonderful surprises for us to discover.

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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. The wind whispers your lovely poetry. Passing this on.

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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Ah, yes, I have been there myself. I had fields as a kid, and used to just lie there in the sunshine, allowing the warm breezes to flow, and the sounds to come. Then I would watch the clouds as they flowed by and dreamed the dreams of knights in battle and Father Winter with his flowing beard blowing that cold wind. I could go on and on, but I do see it well...

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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Really loved it!

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