The Secret To Eternal Smile (limerick)

What a 33rd degree mason looks like.

I always wear smile on my face

I’ll share with you secret of grace

So you too can gloat

Of smile that you tote

Each night in mouth coat hanger place

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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

The visions that creates of the type of smile it would be. . .

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Great smile!

God bless, Faith Reaper

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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

Looking good my friend. :)

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janshares 3 years ago from Washington, DC

:-D Funny, Mhatter99!!

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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Hey Martin you handsome devil love your smile..



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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York


You look good for a guy that must get a crappy night's sleep! Ouch!


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vocalcoach 3 years ago from Nashville Tn.

I just love your smile! A very handsome man...and your limerick is wonderful!

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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

A smile to hang a garment on - that's a laugh

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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

wow, what a smile.

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MsDora 3 years ago from The Caribbean

I like both the rhyme and the picture. This is a feel-good moment. Thank you.

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Valleypoet 3 years ago

Don't ever hang up that smile Martin :-))))

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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Now, that's just sick, Martin! But funny....

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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Funny and your smile is catching....

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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

What an awesome smile!

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breakfastpop 3 years ago

Now that's a smile!

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picklesandrufus 3 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Well I didn't see that one coming:)

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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

O my...I was wondering what you had in store. Love it.

Angels are on the way this evening, Martin. Have a lovely one. :) ps

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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Now that is one hell of a SMILE, a real dazzler! Nice one.

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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

Well, I guess, Martin, that the coat hanger trick could work,

But if the hanger's too large your smile could become a smirk.

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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

That metal smile is a lot cheaper than braces. Great work.

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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99....I guess it could be worse...your teeth could be like stars and come out every night, to sit in a glass by your bed....great picture, who's the good looking dude ?

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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Loved this.

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btrbell 3 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Great one and love the picture. I'm not sure what a 33rd degree mason is but at least now I know what one looks like!

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ImKarn23 3 years ago

night - coat hanger in mouth..check

day - toothpicks in eyes..check..

think i got it now..'re a riot, my friend

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tsmog 3 years ago from Escondido, CA

The title caught my attention. the image brought a grin from ear to ear. The apron offered a sense with feeling as you "I am here to serve . . . one smile at a time." The food says thought is offered as nourishment and more.

Finally, a personal view with knowledge of history, the words are both wisdom and knowledge as equals through synergy offering tomorrow or here of now, a choice of friendship

Usually I would have simply said Nice! meaning speechless.

I bow not "to" more "of" Sir Mhatter99 a man of truth, simply teaching for fun, fun, fun . . . one smile at a time . . .

Sir Sremmus

P.S. thank you for presenting opportunity as a break from writing while authoring . . .

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tillsontitan 3 years ago from New York

I've heard of toothpicks to keep your eyes open but hangers to keep a smile? Looks like you don't need one.

Voted up, funny, and interesting.

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Insightful Tiger 3 years ago

You made me smile! That was needed tonight. Thank you!

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ignugent17 3 years ago

Not only made me smile but made me laugh. :))

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old albion 3 years ago from Lancashire. England.

Your looking very smart here Martin.


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