The Splendor Of Surrender (poem)

Within my arms let’s drift away

We’ll see what heaven has to say

Of lovers who had dreams in view

And kissed a while to make them true


We’ll see what heaven has to say

Within my arms let’s drift away

Where star of Joy behold a dawn

Which memories were built upon


Oh the splendor

Of surrender


When we took a chance

To enter romance

And follow its trance

To let our dreams dance


We’ll see what heaven has to say

As passions fall under our sway

While timeless forever we’ll blaze

And moonlight is left in daze


Oh the splendor

Of surrender


As we took a chance

Our love to enhance

Unveiled an expanse

To dare with dreams dance


Oh the splendor

Of surrender


To give dreams a chance

And magic to glance

Here in our romance

To endlessly dance


Within my arms let’s drift away

Deep in this moment dreamers play

Beyond the kiss of morning’s dew

Dancing on rainbows which we knew


Oh the splendor

Of surrender

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FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

Beautiful sentiments this morning. You have a lovely way with words, Martin. Voted up and more!

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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Martin, this is beautifully done, I love the repetition and cadence like a song.

Voting up and more.

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DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Oh, the second in time when the surrender is near,

the splendor waits, patiently.

Lovely, Martin.

The music and video accompany your poem, perfectly.

Great Job!


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bearnmom 3 years ago from Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania

The music and your words blend perfectly. This is a splendid piece of writing. GBY

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MarleneB 3 years ago from Northern California, USA

Absolutely lovely. The flow is beautiful and reads like a song.

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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Lovely! It must have taken a while to find such great rhymes, too.

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Always lovely, always like a beautiful song ...always, Mh style!

Up and more and sharing


Faith Reaper

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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Beautiful piece!

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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. A romantically wonderful piece.

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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

These sound like good song lyrics.

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abbaelijah 3 years ago from Nigeria

Lovely poem !

Well written oh.........

Voted up.

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