The Sun Rose (poem)

The sun rose like most every day

Those things of the past far away

This morning bodes fresh things to say

As once more I rise to this play

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My senses say my love is there

Her scent brings a blossom to air

A kiss to remove worldly care

This dream that my heart now must bear

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What winds wait to welcome the day

What songs will our love tell to air

One wonders will time really care

When seasons of rain come to play

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I look toward my dream while it’s there

Its kisses are drifting away

Now silence has so much to say

And memories such pain to bear

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I think now what started this play

The note on her pillow won’t say

Oh why did my love go away

The sun rose like most every day

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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter99,

Powerful poetry here buddy! Thought provoker for sure!


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

My dear MHatter.. you are so awesome..

the sun rose every day

love sets most every way

the kisses are so lovely man

I count the stars among the sand

cheers

Debbie


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Curiad 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

Amazing message of memories in very few words. Well said Mhatter.


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Amazing poetry as always. No matter what happens, the sun will rise again. Excellent. You are a master poet! In His Love, Faith Reaper


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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

Amazing way with words Mhatter, another stunning creation. Voted up, beautiful, and awesome.


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

You wrote another awesome poem again!


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dghbrh 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

very nice poem......well done. voting up and sharing


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

to love their love one shud learn from you...and her memories in your poem tells it through!


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

This a beauty, M! Flowing with emotions...... Voting up!


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

I have tried since yesterday to open up this hub, but I was turned away by HubPages on each attempt. Finally I have arrived and oh, those damn memories....and the unanswered questions....haunting for sure, and you captured it all beautifully.


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Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

Awesome and Beautiful!! Emotionally filled with sadness however AMAZING JOB!!!!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Beautiful poem, beautifully done, powerful emotions.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

So wonderfully and beautifully done.


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

Very well done. The turn around in this set of poems is very well crafted. Jamie


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

This is so beautiful. Loved it.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is so beautiful and sad, leaving a note on the pillow, very visual. Loved it..*****


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

Sigh..and life goes on...great poetry, martin!


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stars439 4 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

Awesome, unique, and wonderful are you're poems, and works, and this one too. GBY.


Janhorner 4 years ago

All the comments have left me with almost nothing to say; because they say it all. Wonderful, and I never expect anything different from your beautiful poems.

Jan


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Favorite line - "As once more I rise to this play." Dreams of Shakespeare, perhaps?

Great poem, M.

Voted up.

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