The Wish (poem)

Here was a wish she made one night

This boy to love and hold her tight

To be her hope and guiding light

To be the reason all is right

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Who knew that wishes do come true

And with a tear he loved her too

Into her arms this boy now flew

Yet without wish what would he do

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In love they passed both day and night

Then in a time got married too

Her heart relaxed as moments flew

And something here just wasn’t right

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Now though he stayed forever true

Other’s arms would hold her tight

And for his love he’d leave on light

Till she felt shame what did I do

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She tried so hard to make wrongs right

What could she do to free her light

And as she died he held her tight

Here was a wish she made one night

Comments 18 comments

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eHealer 4 years ago from Las Vegas

Hey Mhatter, so stunning and sharp! Very cool! Shared, pinned, FB'd and voted up!!!


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

great poetry.. love it..

sharing

debbie


Sunnie Day 4 years ago

This was so sad and very heartfelt. How many have missed moments as unforgiveness seemed so unreachable, then it is too late.


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mpropp 4 years ago from Minnesota

beautiful poem and beautiful song.


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PHILLYDREAMER 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

Did she kill herself out of guilt? That last part through me off.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Superb! This is a work of art, and may others learn from the topic.


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abradford55 4 years ago from Howell,MI

loved it such a sad tale but filled with such great description, thanks for sharing.


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Oh so sad yet so beautiful.


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jaydene 4 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

Very moving, fantastic. :)


lovedoctor926 4 years ago

The women considered hot by most men's standards tend to take advantage of guys who like them. I'm with Philly dreamer here. It seems like she killed herself out of guilt. Wish you were here could also mean that only when you've lost something or someone can you really appreciate their worth.


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Another gem from the pen of Mhatter !

Vote up and more !!!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful, I loved it...


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

very nice Mhatter, didn't know you had it in you


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Just beautiful.


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lrc7815 3 years ago from Central Virginia

This one made me cry. Another beautifully sad piece of art.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Martin, what a beautiful portayal of betrayal and regret. Something we need to keep in mind with every breath we take and every selfish act we commit!


Janhorner 3 years ago

The happy bliss then the misery that love can also bring. Voted up,

Jan


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Bumpsysmum 3 years ago from Cambridgeshire

Stirring stuff, emotive and poignant.

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