Their Dream Home (limerick)

Their home was a dream that came true

A love nest for whole world to view

Beyond front door stairs

A world far from cares

For some because theirs was a zoo


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Julie DeNeen 4 years ago from Clinton CT

Hey my house IS a zoo :)


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

I'm running on empty tonight and this is the last hub I'll read....and I was rewarded with your humor and impeccable talent. Thank you for the laugh.


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Lucky Cats 4 years ago from The beautiful Napa Valley, California

And mine is a menagerie~! so there!! Fun and funny...what DOES go on behind closed doors, anyway?


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

I dream of a house that is not like a zoo.


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhater99,

Awesome limerick! I would not want to live in a zoo! :)


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

This sounds like my house...lol..a complete zoo.love your poem..debbie


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

And that oftentimes happens.


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

hhhhhm....sounds like my house.


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco Author

...what DOES go on behind closed doors, anyway? - Gentleman don't tell.(without a lawyer)


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter99,

Did you have to leave that condition? I don't have a lawyer!


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Made 4 years ago from Finland

I'm really glad nobody is watching me in my home. Voted up!


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Boy, I've lived in one of those before! Funny and voted up.!


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dwachira 4 years ago from Nairobi, Kenya

Some of these houses we live in, only God knows. Voted up.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

hahaha! i've seen quite few dream house like that :))


Valleypoet 4 years ago

Very funny and true :-))


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Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

LOL...this limerick felt like my home, which with four kids is a zoo...lol


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suzettenaples 4 years ago from Taos, NM

How cute is that! A zoo - I think every home with kids is like that. Great poem and limerick!


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

Lol...as long as it looks calm and sane from the outside! That's my motto..!


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Sunshine625 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

I grew up in a zoo and still have a zoo. Did you see the movie "We Bought a Zoo?" If not I highly recommend it. Funny and fabulous limerick! :)


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

lol Zoos aren't bad. Animals love them.


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

a perfect home...a zoo, even more pleasurable place sometimes!

quite funny !

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