Then She Let Go...

Waiting..

The pain filling up every part

Every limb

Exhaustion

Just waiting for it to end

The aching emptiness

Leaving a wider void

Giving in to heart's illusion

A gentle comfort

Angel

Softly whispering

And her heart finally

Told her to let go

So

Then she let go...

Let her soul free

And then...

She began to fly

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SubRon7 2 years ago from eastern North Dakota

Not sure where she went when she let go but it sounded like quite a beautiful place....


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thanks Jim, yes it was meant to be. :)


sky9106 2 years ago

Quite beautiful Caroline.....


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Sky. I have missed your poetry. Where have you been? :)


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Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

wow.. stilled me..


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hi Frank thank you for the wonderful compliment. :)


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful! Letting go and flying free. Wonderful!


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Enigmatic Me 2 years ago from East Coast Canada

We should all learn how to let go every once in a while. ..I know I do


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The Frog Prince 2 years ago from Arlington, TX

Very nice. Here's a song that seems to fit.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RBumgq5yVrA

The Frog Prince


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. I enjoyed the imagery of letting go and setting the soul free.


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hi Ruby thank you for your comment stopping by! :)

Hi Enigmatic Me see we should, it's a good thing. LOL Thanks for reading. :)

Hi The Frog Prince that's so funny I love that song. It is so cute! Thanks for that. :)

Hi Gypsy thank you for your sweet comment, dear friend. :)


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FlourishAnyway 23 months ago from USA

In giving up control, one can often gain so much. Beautiful poem.


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carolinemd21 21 months ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Flourish that is so true. :)

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