There Was A Day (poem)

I fell through a hole

I couldn’t explain

Didn’t try

Why should I

No reply

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A part of my soul

Now drifting with pain

Sadly sigh

say goodbye

Wonder why

=

But there was a day

A beautiful play

So much to convey

Our hearts showed the way

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What madness did stroll

Down path of insane

Don’t deny

That a lie

Made her cry

-

So bitter a toll

I now must maintain

Once blue sky

Soon must die

Stupid guy

-

But there was a day

When we’d dream away

In smiles would we stray

And problems defray

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But I fell through hole

And darkness attain

Didn’t try

Trusted lie

To get by

-

What now will console

Some peace to regain

To apply

And rely

What’s nearby

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Yes there was a day

When in love we’d stay

Please come back I pray

What else can I say

Comments 16 comments

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SiberianWolf 3 years ago from MidWest

a beautiful sadness lives here... powerful words... you can feel the heart of the distraught in this.... Nice ink!!


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Oh, how very sad when we do not really mean to hurt another, and then down we go into that deep dark hole. Perfect song and video too. It is very painful no doubt.

Voted up ++++ and sharing

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

Such power in your words - such connection - always one who has to hurt.


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Beautiful rhythm,short,direct and so profound words.I voted up.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

People hurt each intentionally and not intentionally so life is always full of surprises.


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

I like to believe that love can be re-kindled. Up and beautiful.


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Such a sad place to be---stuck somewhere between the hurt and the pain.

We feed the hungry wolf with our discontent. So often, there is no other place to be.

Good job, Martin.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

The metre running easily ; you are so talented my dear friend. Enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99...we never know what lies ahead...until it's that day and we start to dread...

and then it's to late to reciprocate..all is lost..and so have we....dread the day, we hope we never see..discontent.. time to precious and no time to lament.

an original work..by me


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

The video adds so much to this piece. Sometimes we just never know why. Beautiful....


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ytsenoh 3 years ago from Louisiana, Idaho, Kauai, Nebraska, South Dakota, Missouri

My favorite line, "So bitter a toll..." I like the way you put this together. It totally evokes regret and sadness. Thumbs up.


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girishpuri 3 years ago from NCR , INDIA

Martin, excellent as usual, God bless.


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thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

A lovely poem, with a nice balanced. Vote up.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Sometimes lies create damage that cannot be forgotten, let alone forgiven. We must always think before we speak or act.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Martin, I adore the soulful tone in this, and the subject bears fault.


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

Too little, too late...sometimes we realize our mistakes after what we treasure slips away.

Your way with words is always captivating to me.

Sending you Angels all the way to your home :) ps

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