These Memories (tanka)

All these memories

Each one precious and so dear

Isn’t it funny

These monuments of moments

Change shape through my lover’s lips


More reflections by Martin Kloess

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Love this!

A lot said in so little words.

Voted up +++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

This on really made me think. I'm still not sure I get it tho.


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

Beautiful...


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

'Monuments of moments' - I love that!


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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

Yes, - those past photo's can change shape depending where we are in life -nothing stays the way we want it.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Beautiful!


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Nice!


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Martin, a beautiful tanka ......on reflection, we can see how time changes our perspective, but those tender moments lives on.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

I loved this one!


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

Good one!

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