Over Coffee

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Over Coffee

They met over coffee...
She fell into those eyes,
captured by the spell of
those witty, sweet replies.
The chemistry, electric,
made her cheeks begin to blush...
her hopeful heart was pounding
in a rhythmic, dancing rush.

They met over coffee...
her smile lit up the room.
The atmosphere was scented
by her delicate perfume.
Her voice was soft and lilting,
her laugh a gentle ring.
The twinkle in her smiling eyes
made the angels sing.

They met over coffee...
This is how it all began,
A spark that would smoulder
and ignite as if by plan...
and long would they remember
where it was they met and fell
into the arms of romance
cast by cappuccino's spell.




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tumblintumblweed 5 years ago

Well, No_Clue...I guess that must be the answer to falling in love! Guess I'll go out for coffee,instead! lol.. Great job, as usual. . Voted up!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Well, ttw, this was kind of an off the wall write...but thank you, as always!


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feenix 5 years ago

No_Clue, such a romantic and warm hub. I really do love this work of art and it is truly beautiful.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

Excellent!

Voted up and beautiful.


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Brilliant No_Clue,

thank you so much for sharing this beautiful hub.

Here's to many more hubs to share and take care

Eiddwen.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

feenix, thank you! I so appreciate your visit and feedback!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

WillStarr,Thank you kindly, sir! Its always a pleasure to have you visit!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Eiddwen, thank you, Sweet Lady! Blessings!


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Amy Becherer 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

I related to the sweet emotion and feeling of hopefulness you gave this piece. I could sense the excitement in the beginnings of love. I feel the romance and your piece kept perfect time with the upbeat feelings of love's first happiness. The outdoor cafe sets the ambiance of this encounter and made me think about that feeling of being the only two people in the world right then and there. You captured it, No_Clue, perfectly.


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CreatePerfection 5 years ago from Beautiful Colorado

Your writing is so beautiful and inspired. Thank you for this lovely hub.

Up/Awesome

Lela


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Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

Beautiful poem-thoroughly enjoyed it, although, I could have bet (and lost) that the last line would have read something like:

...and long would they remember where it was they met, and fell

into the arms of romance, captured by that coffee smell.

:)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

How completely romantic. This is brilliant and I totally loved it. Voting up and pressing your buttons.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Amy, thank you, kindly!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Lela, thank you for your read and lovely comment! I so appreciate it!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Denise, I actually like your ending better, it ties the end to the beginning, I just didn't think of it!!! Thank you for your read and great comment!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

acaetnna, thank you! I so appreciate it!


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

Beautifully written once again No-Clue, you are still my fav poetic girl. It's a shame I don't like

coffee, write us another about tea,.....pleeeeease


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Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

No_Clue--please, by all means feel free to change it - No problem, really. Call it yours. :)


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Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

I like it, I like it...(the ending) Nicely done, LOL


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attemptedhumour 5 years ago from Australia

I just love your flowing text, it goes down like an early morning cappuccino. Smooth, but with a strong bite. Cheers


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Denise, I wish I had thought of it first but I must say, I like this ending much better. Actually, I prefer your first proposal but...for the sake of originality I didn't want to steal it! I so thank you, though!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

attemptedhumour, I just love your awesome visits and comments! Thank you! Cheers to you, as well!


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maven101 5 years ago from Northern Arizona

Very warm and bouncy prose...Viva la Coffee...Viva la Love !!...Nice shot of romance with my morning cup of joe...Voted up...Thanks, Larry


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Thank you kindly, Larry! I appreciate your visit!


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CMCastro 5 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

Cool poem!


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

awwww this is cute, hehe cappachinos spell thats clever.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Thank you, Christina.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Nikkij, thanks! Its a lovely thought, anyway, wishful thinking, perhaps!


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

very romantic!


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Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

No_Clue-you're ending fits right in both with the coffee theme and the (cupid) 'magic' theme. Cool. :)


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Denise, I owe this one to you! Your proposed ending was perfect but I felt guilty, stealing it! So I had to make it mine, somehow. I still feel a bit guilty but this ending works better for me personally. I do thank you for your suggestion!


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Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

Glad to offer the support. Your piece is great.


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

NC,

Really great piece of poetry. I really enjoy your work!

Sharyn


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Sharyn, thank you kindly, I am delighted!


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epigramman 5 years ago

...well I'd love to meet you over coffee ...I must come here more often for a coffee date - I keep getting distracted by your alter ego - have you ever thought of combining the two? Like the epi-man - lol - he puts 'everything' into his melting pot - lol lol - and let's it simmer like a good spicy chicken gumbo - lol


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Epi, I get distracted by my alter ego! lol...I have contemplated a marriage but it seems like oil and water to me....but then, that could make a heck of a tasty Italian dressing...we could serve a wonderful meal of salad and gumbo with coffee for dessert!


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Such a warm, gentle romance, made me smile inside out =)


No_Clue 4 years ago

Awww, shucks! hehe, that's what my Logan always says! Thank you!

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