Who invented flirting ?......fun verse

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He dreams of touch and of foreplay
as he passes through
a woman's scent

Of lazy afternoons and the sounds of
her laughter and giggling
and those sighs

Just why can't we love and touch
as if there were no rules

To touch one and not all
seems so wrong

The variety of sounds of souls
of bodies and beauties

To each woman a separate but
equal attraction

Is it always all women for a mans
imagination and one man
for hers

Maybe just maybe that's why
God invented flirting

Or was it the devil?

Or was it woman?

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tsmog 2 years ago from Escondido, CA

I read this twice 'ahorseback' as I reminisced of the truths laced through the stanzas. Nice! And, thank you for the memories brought to life.

tim


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old albion 2 years ago from Lancashire. England.

Hi Ed. Lovely wistful poetry here, with the difficult question at the end. I also enjoyed your profile poem so very different.

Graham.


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DDE 2 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

An interesting and powerful mind shared here.


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Ryem 2 years ago from Maryland

I enjoyed the build up throughout this poem leading to the questions at the end. This is a great write, thanks for sharing!


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Ruchira 2 years ago from United States

Liked how you played with the basics of love and went with it...interesting :)


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

I read it twice and each time i concluded, both are guilty as charged.lol


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ahorseback 2 years ago Author

You guys are great for commenting , thank you , I was ,after all, just flirting around !.....your friend , Ed


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Nadine May 2 years ago from Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Nice! Was it written in your dreams? The sky is the limit on the lower astral plane.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

hey Ed. I can relate to your thinking in this poem. Well done! But I beg to reserve my answer to the questions at the end, for fear of my well being either at the hands of satan or my wife...lol. Voted up.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Flirting was designed to weave its magic till the passion cannot be denied. Hugs Ed. Love your poetic side.


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Perspycacious 2 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

I had a Hub on this topic and didn't reconstruct it after a Hub catastrophe made it disappear---not intended to grace HubPages, I presume---just vanished! Glad you are getting some comments from your effort.

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