Best Friends

I want to tell you about two friends

named Alex and Ben.

They would always compete and contend

with each other playing to win.

Both men suffered defeat at the hand of his friend

but never let it come between them in the end.

So time goes on and Alex got married

to a beautiful woman named Mary who had a twin sister named Carrie.

Alex decided to introduce her to Ben.

Everything was going great,

they were scheduled for a double date

dinner at 8:00.

But Alex called Mary

and left a message saying that he was going to be late.

An hour goes past

and Alex leaves work at last

but desperate for time, gotta go, gotta go

He raced home to shower and change his clothes.

Busting through the front door,

shedding his uniform on the floor, he darted up the stairs

then stopped dead in his tracks.

There was a guy laying on his back

underneath the twins, it was Ben.

One sitting on his face and the other saddled his lap.

Alex was shocked as he watched

the twins, both with flawless skin,

bucking wildly and slapping ass.

A grin crossed Alex's face,

he thought about revenge but what a waste.

How could any real man let such a good thing pass.

After all, he and Ben were friends

so they decided to call a truce

and Alex joined in.





Copyright © 2011 Daunt'e Loper

Comments 11 comments

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Nellieanna 5 years ago from TEXAS

Oh, my! Well, men ARE from Mars, they say! haha.

Fun rhythm in this one.


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Exactly, LOL


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valeriebelew 5 years ago from Metro Atlanta, GA, USA

Sounds kinky to me. Were those dudes on meth?????


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Crazy story,I know


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epigramman 5 years ago

...hey man ....this is so awesome because when you write from that beautiful heart of yours the mind will always follow .....and like the epigramman - lol - it's always good to be full of surprises - keep 'em guessing I say - and always march to the beat of your own poetic drummer which you do so very well .....


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thank you epigramman, I appreciate the positive feedback:)


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Norma Budden 5 years ago from Nunavut, Canada

Well, this is crossing the limits of what I would expect, and accept, from a best friend. I can't help but wonder where they go from here.


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

I watch too much T.V and sometimes I let my imagination run wild Norma.


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Norma Budden 5 years ago from Nunavut, Canada

LOL. I let my imagination run wild, too, but yours apparently runs wilder than mine does. Then again, I rarely watch TV. :)


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PerfectJumpOff 5 years ago from Worlwide

It's no fun,if the homie can't have some ; P

Boys will be boys!


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

LOL, Thanks JumpOff;)

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