This Is A Test (“limerick”)

My date well she wasn’t quite dressed

So there on her couch I did rest

When door to her nook

Swung open from hook

And gave me a look at her fine collection of magazines


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

I may be laughing for quite some time about this one. Great job; thanks for the great laugh!


Valleypoet 4 years ago

Beggars can't be choosers! LOL:-))


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Ow wee, she gave you a look at her magazine books! That was a surprising twist.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

And how were they arranged?


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Guffaw!


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Darrylmdavis 4 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

Loved the little twist at the end of this poem. Thanks for sharing :-)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

Great one!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

And I thought there would be more there than just magazines.

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