This Real Bitter Pill (limerick)

I couldn’t believe it was true

But wife and I were really through

And no tear could still

This real bitter pill

When waiter brought bill which was due

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DJ Anderson 3 years ago

I bet she ordered lobster for her dinner.

It would make for a more dramatic exit,

for he would not forget that bill any time soon!

Love it, Martin!


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Ericdierker 3 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Great. It really got me good.

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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Shrimp with a T bone on the side..Yummy..Hee

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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Funny one.

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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

Wifey will never get thinner,

Eating that sort of dinner.

'Twould be much better to stint

If you would like to see her thin(t).

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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Taxes, bills, and death, the three things which we cannot escape.

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