Thought Left Behind (poem)

Just where will it lead this thought left behind

Through fields of moments where reflections grow

And winds will still sweep a blossom through mind

Some lingering kiss which will not let go

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This echo of hope of another day

Where dreams by starlight would splendor ignite

As streams of wonder were put on display

And each sigh of dawn met promised delight

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My heart now beats the song of its reply

Tread softly comes a murmuring refrain

It gives no meaning nor some depth to why

As something left forgotten might explain

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And so sweet thought we dance another time

When I have put some meaning to life’s rhyme

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

That is a thought . . . putting meaning to life's rhyme. Very beautiful.

Voted up +++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Poetry is true in so many ways and you say it so well with such great imagination


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Beautiful!

Words, as smooth as silk, stroke the imagination of the

mind.

Inspiring work, Martin.

DJ.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

I love the ending in this one, Martin. Very inspiring.


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ARUN KANTI 3 years ago from KOLKATA

It takes a lot of creative imagination to build up such nice poems. Thank you very much for sharing.


always exploring 3 years ago

Beautiful thoughts..


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

Your poems are always a pleasure and undoubtedly make emotions arise. Deep and uplifting, sweet and romantic. Beautiful!


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Martin, beautifully done, very touching.


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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

I especially love the cadence of this poem. Expertly connecting the meaning with the sound. Nicely done.


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Lovely choice of words, use of alliteration, metaphor - there's even a sense of onomatopoeia about it. Beautiful.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Nice sentiments. Enjoyed and passing this on.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

You play he scene like a violin, the strains so apt and synchronized so well...


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Voted up and shared Martin.

Another true gem by you.

Eddy.

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