An Aeroplane Drones Through the Sky

An Aeroplane Drones Through the Sky

Antibes, by Claude Monet,  French Impressionism.
Antibes, by Claude Monet, French Impressionism.
Copyright by alexisparkinn.com
Copyright by alexisparkinn.com
Before the Rain, copyright by Sergey Anisimov
Before the Rain, copyright by Sergey Anisimov

An Aeroplane Drones Through the Sky

An aeroplane drones through the sky,
The world is afternoon;
And from the mountains mounting high
A drowsy distant boom

As swirling ash and heavy smoke
The thunder comes up from the coast,
Breaking out in cannonade
That seems to grow and then to fade;

As sweeping dust into my face,
The rattling of a chariot race,
Comes leaping fire in the trees
With jagged arms, a fantasy

Of Casbah dancers from the sea;
A virtuouso in the sky
Leaps abandon to the eye,

To thundering of distant drums
That mount upon the tiny hum
Of the speck-like aeroplane
Dissolving into misty rain.

© Tan Pratonix

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Nellieanna 6 years ago from TEXAS

I love the "music" of this poem, Pratonix! It's lyrical, it's magical. Your words and phrases are like strains of Brahms or brush-strokes of Renoir. Just lovely! Thanks!


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Pratonix 6 years ago from Asia Author

Thank you, Nellie. That's high praise, indeed. :)


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kaltopsyd 6 years ago from Trinidad originally, but now in the USA

I love the rhythm and the flow of this piece. I really enjoyed reading it! Thanks for the good read.


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Pratonix 6 years ago from Asia Author

Thank you, Kalto. I can't read long pieces. So I write short stuff. Bless you, and may you live for the Lord Jesus. :)


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kaltopsyd 6 years ago from Trinidad originally, but now in the USA

Thank you for the blessings! Yes, I do live for the Lord Jesus. ;-) -- I just had to come back and respond to your response. Hehe, that's just me!


Lizbeth 6 years ago

Absolutely beautiful. Truly blessed me as I love rain and thunder and lightening storms.


Lorry Buehler 6 years ago

Thank You For Your Blessing,.. The Lord Jesus Christ Is The Love Of My Life And His Precious Word And Doctrines,.. Thank You, Grace And Love


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Pratonix 6 years ago from Asia Author

Blessings to you, Kalto, Lizbeth, Lorry. 2 Cor 13:14.

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