Tides Of Memory (tanka)

They return in tides

Every drop of memory

Moments once thought past

In the rivers of one’s life

From eternal sea of time


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

Love this. How beautifully you have shared this. Those tides of moments past do roll in and around us for sure.

Voted up ..beautiful and awesome...shared

Angels are on the way :) ps


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

mhatter99,

Beautiful! Why do the painful tides seem to roll in stronger than the pleasant ones? Tell me the next time you're heading to the beach, I'll pack a bag :-)

Cat


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

This is so true Martin. Beautifully written!


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

This is beautiful and voted that way.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful Martin!!!!!!!!


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99.... aahhh yes....and the tides are usually low and filled with debris that you thought had gone to the landfill years ago...thanks for the share....


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vespawoolf 3 years ago from Peru, South America

Wow, I love this one. "They return in tides/every drop of memory" is so true, and becomes truer with the passing of the years. Thank you!


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Very beautiful and profound tanka!

Love this!

Voted up +++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Loved this. Already passed on.


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Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

this was indeed.. deep.. and amazing


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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

So symbolic, those tides of memory, eternally coming ashore.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

The tides continue to ebb and flow, whispering their songs of what once was...


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suzettenaples 3 years ago from Taos, NM

How true! Memories do come back in tides - great metaphor.


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

How very profoundly beautiful.

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