Time: A Poem


Time,

Broken into pieces,

Seconds, ignored,

Minutes, counted,

Hours, noticed,

Days, wasted,

Weeks, lengthy,

Months, celebrated,

Years, remembered,

Time,

Broken into pieces,

Moments, shared.


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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

cleverly done. Thank you


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

Mhatter99: Thanks! You're welcome. :)


Valleypoet 3 years ago

Really liked this...simple but very well crafted:-))


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

Valleypoet: Thank you! It is simple and short, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.


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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Very nice piece...or should I say, "timepiece" ( :


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

A lovely, simple poem, well-written. Enjoyed it.


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NateB11 3 years ago from California, United States of America

Beautiful poem: Simple, succinct, meaningful.


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

wayne barrett: Thanks! Haha; good joke.

BlossomSB: I'm glad it brought a smile to your face. :)

NateB11: Those are great adjectives. Thank you!


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khmazz 3 years ago from South Florida

I really enjoy your writing! This poem is fantastic!


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

khmazz: Thanks so much!


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gaplumber 3 years ago

I get in trouble all the time for writing short and sweet, you confirm my beliefs, get it up and out.


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

gaplumber: Thanks for commenting!


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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

short, but still evocative-thank you


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

ocfireflies: Thanks for appreciating this!


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ahorseback 3 years ago

Very nice ! really !..........:-}


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

ahorseback: Thanks! :)


Ann 3 years ago

I have no answer about time .but I love the way you write about it.


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

Ann: Yes, time is very mysterious. Thank you!

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