Timeless Memory (poem)

Recall the wind now far away

That brushed across the silver sand

To form a timeless memory

There by the ocean’s side

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Tomorrow was another’s day

There seemed so much we had at hand

The world was formed for you and me

We floated on such pride

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There every dream was at our sway

Another’s wish at our command

We marveled at such clarity

A rollercoaster ride

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The winds of time did blow our way

So much once us they did disband

The sweetest songs of what can be

Was taken by the tide

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Yet past those shadows of dismay

Amid so much which wasn’t planned

The moments lost to wind its fee

Our love has never died

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Recall the wind now far away

That brushed across our life so grand

And left me with a memory

To whisper with my bride

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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

I get so wrapped up in your limericks that often I forget to read your poems, and that is a loss for me. This is beautiful, and that is coming from a person not fond of poetry.


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter99,

Very beautiful poetry wrapped up in powerful imagery! Awesome choice for picture as well!


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Curiad 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

Beautiful words and memories!


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Romantic memories are a treasure and so was your poem awesome!


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SkySlave 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Beautiful and brilliantly expressed! Wonderful job. Voted up!


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

love is like this..never ending , endured with repeated timeless memories ! ...wow!!


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shalini sharan 4 years ago from Delhi

i loved these timeless memories, and as it has do with love, it is a cherry on the cake

great work


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK

Wonderful poem, words carried along on a gentle ocean tide, 'There every dream was at our sway'...how I wish I had written that line :o)


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

The words you used in this wonderfully written poem describe timeless memories so beautifully !

Vote up and more !!!


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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

Such a joy to read your poetry Mhatter. Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Mhatter99

True love survives the storms.

Beautiful, precious and romantic.

Voted up and away

Take care :)


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City

Beautiful music here, and lovely poem for a married couple, I will ask my wife to check this poem out to, smooth.

Voted up and getting shared.


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

The flow of your poem along with your words was absolutely beautiful.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Memories can be such beautiful things. We all build them.


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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

This is a beautiful poem! All love should be this durable.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is the most beautiful one. Your words are magical and true...


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Wonderful poetry, Mhatter!


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MelChi 4 years ago from Cape Town, South Africa

Your words flow like the wind - truly beautiful!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. This is such a romantic poem.


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

So gentle and loving. Really felt as though I was floating on your words. Beautiful.


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PurvisBobbi44 4 years ago from Florida

That was so sweetly worded to take ones breath away. Great work as always.

I voted beautiful and awesome. And tweeted it to share with all my followers.

Your Hub Friend,

Bobbi Purvis


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teaches12345 4 years ago

You have a beautiful way of writing. Your passion in poetry really makes for great reading. Such a beautiful poem and could make a great Valentine's Day card insert.


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

M, another romantic poem. Beautiful. Voted up.

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