Poem: 'Tis the little things...

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'Tis the little things...

'Tis the little things

That I remember

From the times that we spent in sweet surrender

'Tis the minutiae

That makes me hunger

For you and the love that we shared together

*

The way that your lips curl when you smile

To paint them in words will take a while

The glint in your eyes that lit my days

The mischievous looks in your angel face.

*

The way that you hook your arm in mine

The way that you mess my hair, divine

The look in your face as you trim my nails

The tears that you shed when something fails

*

'Tis the little things

That I remember

From the times that we spent in sweet surrender

'Tis the minutiae

That makes me hunger

For you and the love that we shared together

*

The obsessively neat and tidy rooms

Music you choose to chase the gloom

The toasts that you burn but make me eat

The screams of pleasure at tickled feet

*

The way that you hurt when I am mad

The hugs that I get when I am sad

The way that you curl up when you sleep

The simple gestures that reach so deep

*

You told me

I'll find another

To love and to care and to hold forever

Tell me sweet Will I ever

Forget the little things that I remember.

***

© 2010 Mohan Kumar

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Sunnie Day 5 years ago

Good Morning Docmo,

It is the little things!

"The way that you hurt when I am mad

The hugs that I get when I am sad

The way that you curl up when you sleep

The simple gestures that reach so deep"

Up awesome and beautiful! This is my favorite line..Caring about the little things..amount to big things in ones heart.

Have a blessed day. Thank you for sharing your gift.

Sunnie


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Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

Beautiful Doc, it really shows how love is, wonderful! voted up and shared, nell


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Daisy Mariposa 3 years ago from Orange County (Southern California)

Mohan (Docmo),

'Tis the little things which tell of love...

How beautifully perceptive and sensitive you are, my friend.

Brilliant writing, as always.


dreamseeker2 3 years ago

First of all, I have to say...I love Lionel Richie, so therefore your choice in music! : ) Beautiful poem, so awesomely written!!!! Wow, I love it! Such beauty in the 'little things' you mention. Must be shared, my fellow writer. Voted up and beautiful, for sure!


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DanaTeresa 3 years ago from Ohio

Thank you to Daisy for sharing this, otherwise I am not sure I would have found it. What a bittersweet poem. It is those little things that seem to be the most special. Those are the things that really make a relationship. It is so very bittersweet when they are only memories, not to be witnessed first hand again.... lovely to read this.


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Daisy Mariposa 3 years ago from Orange County (Southern California)

Mohan (Docmo),

I'm sharing your beautiful poem once again. It should receive many more comments than it has already received.


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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

Love is eternal. Love bonds people. Life and living maneuvers through love. This is beautiful.


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torrilynn 3 years ago

Docmo,

Really nice poem that you have here I really did enjoy reading

Voted up


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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Docmo: This is such a beautiful poem expressing the treasure of pure love. Kudos to Daisy for sharing this, enabling me to find it. Voting up!


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Doc, this is so beautiful! It truly is the little things that make a difference and cause you to fall deeper in love.

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