To My Better Half

Together As A Team

The years of life are only a path to follow like a stone patio carefully made

We take our emotions and love and combine them to create effort

It is easier to see our mistakes than to see our progress but each is visible

As we learn to accept the truth and work towards a common goal

Life can not be truely satisfying until we have someone to share

The more we open our heart the more we bare

Feelings of vunerability and past mistakes are revealed

Only so we can heal

Together we unify toward a common goal

Experiencing life and it's new meaning

A treasure to enjoy and to hold

For in our darkest hour we find the power

To succeed with all our dreams

Forced to realize we are only part of the solution

When it is our other half that carries us on to completion


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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

"For in our darkest hour WE find the power". Just the use of we in this write is what brings the true meaning of a deep love between two people. great write. !


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

cleaner 3 I am so very pleased to see you presence.You speak from knowledge I slowly learn as I guide my way toward more understanding.Thanx to the truth you reveal in your comments and constant encouragement.Have a great night.


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shara63 3 years ago from Delhi

one who is spending his /her life without any partner, can feel it even better!......nice way to express the importance of partner in our life!


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

shara63 I love to see people do well in life.To create the world they can enjoy so much.Thanx for reading.Have a wonderful day.


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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

Such an important message written from the heart.

Partners are such an important part. If you are lucky enough to find a good one, hang onto them.


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

shiningirisheyes The right person makes the world so much easier and every day filled with lots of love.Don't stop until you find the right one.Thanx for sharing have a great night.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

So wonderful, romantic and heart felt. Loved this.


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

Gypsy Rose Lee Life is about sharing experiences good and bad and working to make our days more exciting and loving.Thanx so much for reading and enjoying.


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picklesandrufus 3 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

A nice read, reminding us of the beauty of having a partner. Lovely!


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

picklesandrufus Living life with energy and love that constantly flow between two people reaching new heights and supporting each others needs is natural and amazing.Thanx so much for sharing.


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Dim Flaxenwick 3 years ago from Great Britain

Someone is a very lucky lady.

This was romantic and oh so beautiful.


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

Dim Flaxenwick I am still not sure how it happened.I am blessed with life and love.The two go together so well they are like the sunrise and the sunset.Both beautiful and exciting but yet so different.Thanx for reading.

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