To My Surprise - Lyrical Poetry By Cathy Nerujen

About this love poem...

This lyrical poetry is inspired by listening to the music and romantic songs of Frank Sinatra. It's about love so deep and so profound - the words feel as though they were dipped in wine... like a melody that has haunted me for ever. I hope music lovers enjoy it as much as poetry lovers do. Dedicated to the one I love...

To My Surprise

My surprise
came -
it was a hurricane -

down my spine
you slid -
those eyes -
could launch a hundred ships -
like creeping ninja spies -
a thousand finger tips -

you see -
my love -
tonight I'll make you mine -
sweet lovers lips entwine -
our love's forever more -
we dance upon the shore -
like windmills in the wind -
like wings of butterflies -
two twinkling candle lights -

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your eyes -
oh baby your
sweet brown eyes -
what a sweet surprise -

this thing that we're
becoming -
like champagne bubbles
bubbling -

like spices in my mouth -
two lovebirds flying south -

where we can live -
as one -

Oh I am so undone ...

to my surprise -

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You took me here tonight -
this tender golden light -
this thing I want so much -
these feelings when we touch -
this sense of being around you -
and now I've found you -

leave nothing here to chance -
let me hold you as we dance -
cheek to cheek -
skin to skin -
in open arms -
so finger thrilling ...
down my spine
you slide -
my eyes are open wide -

to my surprise -

To My Surprise - poem dedicated to Fehl Dungo
To My Surprise - poem dedicated to Fehl Dungo | Source

our love is forever more -
now we dance upon the shore -
like windmills in the wind -
like wings of butterflies -
two twinkling candle lights -
oh wings of butterflies -

two hearts that beat as one -

oh Fehl, I'm so undone -

but then it's

no surprise -

this way I'm feeling -

about you.

Dedicated with love and so many hugs for Fehl Dungo. As always, as ever, she inspires my words.

Copyright (c) 2013 - 2016 Cathy Nerujen. All Rights reserved.

(This is just one of several poems in a series of romantic poetry I am publishing on Hub Pages, and there are many more in a forthcoming book of romantic poems coming in late 2016. More information on the magazine at www.flashstarmagazine.com ).


More poetry by Cathy - "It's Not The Sea But Us Who Are The Tide"
and "You're Someone Like Me".

Cathy Nerujen Poetry
Cathy Nerujen Poetry | Source

"Toss and Turn" by HubPages writer Marifel Dungo

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39 comments

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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Nice song. Your meter is quite tight. A lot of (musical) possibilities here. Thank you for this.


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Darrylmdavis 3 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

This was a really sweet write. Cannot wait to see more :-)


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frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

I love this. Its so fun and fast moving and playful and romance is like the air - like a skip through the most beautiful park in all the lands the sky twinkling in fairy tales and happy endings. Thanks so much for sharing. Cheers Cathy.


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Mhatter99, thank you for the comment. I must admit I never overtly tried writing a poem that started out as a song almost as much as a love poem. Some of my other poems in my hubs have better meter than even this.

But the idea and inspiration behind this is a very special person in my life, so it was always going to be a poem eventually. It's really for her, and yes, the possibilities are in there, musically... just as they are romantically...

Hi Darrylmdavis, it was a sweet inspiration and I enjoyed creating it. Every word is from the heart...

Hi Frankie: it is always wonderful to find you reading my poems and lending your ear to my words. It's meant to be playful and upbeat and intimate, yes... it's how I feel... and it's love...

Thank you for the nice comments. Have a sweet day. :)


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Nikkij504gurl 3 years ago from Louisiana

Very sweet and beautiful. full of love and passion. as always. youre such a romantic. hugs and kisses!


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very tender and loving, tingling spine is unique..Love it....


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Romantically wonderful.


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you...

Your words are like champagne bubbles beautifully intoxicating and addicting. I love the flow and composition. It really takes reader. Mwaaaaaaaaaah! This is so lovely, sexy and beautiful baby and I wanna kiss you so much now. :)


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Nikki. Wow, as always you get to the heart of my poetry. Yes I can't help but be addicted to romantic poems. Heh. :P

Thank you so much. You are a loyal fan always. Lots of hugs and kisses back. :)


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Ruby, like your hub name, my poems are "always exploring" that amazing subject of love. I wonder will I ever write about something else? I probably won't. LOL.

Spine tingling... wow. I love it when my words have these affects on people.

Hi Gypsy Rose Lee, thank you for the comments. I am a hopeless romantic... but getting more hopeful and less hopeless, I think.

Hi Fehl my honeybunny, yes this one is for you. As always. I wrote it from the heart as I always do. And listening to \Frank Sinatra was part of how this one. And I was trying some new things and some different approaches to love a poem and lyrical poetry. Sinatra got me in the mood, I guess. Hehehe. Thank you for saying this. :)

I always melt when you say things like this. I love writing poems for you that are nice and sexy and also romantic, Fehl. I love you so much, baby. Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah :)

XOXOXOXOXOX


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epigramman 3 years ago

Nothing ever surprises me about you Cathy and Fehl as you have both inspired the greatest love story of all time and it's in these beautiful words I can see and read both of your hearts beating at the same time.

A little homework assignment involving Frank Sinatra with my favorite ballet dancer Mikhail Baryshnikov on you tube - check out Mikhail's dance tribute to the music of Sinatra - it is dance nirvana with the fusion of music and choreography.

Sending you my sincere warmest wishes from Colin and Little Miss Tiffy and Mister Gabriel at lake erie time ontario canada 3:15pm and I sent you a nice card Miss C for you and Fehl to share on your FB wall


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Colin,

Wow... thank you for these bold sweet words. Nothing surprises you? LOL. Um, I hope I still have the ability to surprise with my poems. I have lots of new ideas and plans for my poetry. I am working on a new Magazine project and it involves creative reading that includes poetry. :)

You are a big Sinatra fan, I know. I will check out the Ballet dance on Facebook. Aww, you are so sweet, You get warm hugs from me today, Mr Epi. Thank you for the card. You are wonderful. Fehl would be so happy to see this. :)

Have a sweet beautiful day at Lake Erie, Colin. Warmest wishes and hugs from me. :)

Cassy also says hi from our kitchen... where a late night mini feast is happening... we are not long home from a friend's house. Hi to Miss Tiffy and Mister Gabriel. Mwah. :)


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Nothing excites me quite like love poetry...


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Cheeky Girl 3 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

This is a very beautiful poem, Cathy! You rock!


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Cassy. Why am I not surprised to find you liking To my Surprise. Hehehe. :P

I hope that made sense. :)

Breakfast is on me, okay?


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you...

hehehe you are so cheeky these days honey :p


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epigramman 3 years ago

Dear Cathy - these words once again 'thrill me and kill me' and they sound and read as fresh as the first time they 'seduced' me -wish I could write with such free and open lustful abandon and your pen doesen't seem to be writing the words as much as your incredibly beautiful heart and yes they can't teach this at writing school - it just happens - and you my friend - are a happening !!!!

Sending love and hugs to you and your sweetie from Colin and his cats after just arriving home and listening to reggae loud , lol , at lake erie time canada 1:33am


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Fehl. Yes, Cassy is her usual self. LOL. She is one busy lady, and is away for a few days because of her work.

Me, so cheeky? Really? H'mmm... I might be coming down with something... Hehehe :)

I love you so much, Fehl. ^_^


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Colin :)

You already write with such free and wild uninhibited abandon already. LOL :) You mean there is a more free and more lustful abandon that can be reached through writing of sensual romantic poetry? Tell me quickly where it is, please? (Cathy smiles like a drunken fool and grabs her notepad...)

Hehehe. Me trying to seduce you, Colin. Surely not. ;)

Wasn't this a scene from "The Graduate"? LOL.

Oh you are such a flatterer. And it's working. LOL.

You always make me smile and you are a big fan of my honest heartfelt poems, Mister Epi. I could never not write from the heart. That would not be poetry to me.

Um, teaching it at school... Hopefully poetry is flourishing in schools everywhere and letting people explore their emotions in ways that other writing does not quite allow so much, so freely... Poetry is thriving in the UK and lots of other places, like Canada the USA and Asia, including a sweet place in the Philippines I want to visit so much... with a beautiful lady.

Wow, lots of love from me... and from us, and we love reggae so much. It can be loud and I love the soulful, deep and ambient side to this music. The rhythms can be so hypnotizing. Have a sweet day at lake Erie my wonderful friend. :)

xxx


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epigramman 3 years ago

Just dropped by dear Cathy to say hello and good afternoon from Colin and Little Miss Tiffy and Mister Gabriel and I am up now after night shift sleep with first cup of coffee and a sonata for oboe and guitar.

I hope sincerely all is well with you and your darling sweetie and I just posted and linked your main introduction hub page on FB for all to see - lake erie time ontario canada 1:09pm and sending 3 big Canadian hugs to both of you from the three of us


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Colin. Wow, that sounds so romantic, awake with a first coffee, and music of the oboe and guitar... Gosh, that is so poetic.... :)

Yes I am well, and tired from a day of being out with my family. Things are good here. Thank you for posting my profile page. You are so sweet. I love your hubs lately. Your writing is always so rich and imaginative. :)

Cassy also says hi. Have a sweet day Colin. Hi to Miss Tiffy and Mister Gabriel. xxx


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twentyfive 3 years ago

Sending my twenty-five million hugs today after reading this sweet and romantic poem again. You bring me bliss always. I love you baby :)

Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Good morning my sweet honeybunny. Wow, 25 million hugs for me today? Aaaawwwwww..... Um, is this because of yesterday, I wonder... in our chat... and um.... the ... um... .

Okay, I get it now, Fehl. Hehehe. :P

Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. I love you so much. Thank you for loving my poems, honey. I am just about to grab some food. :)


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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

Cathy,

I read your poem in a morning when

I can see flowers blooming in my garden through my window,

I can hear birds twittering,

I can feel warm sunlight on my skin.

The feeling of love and longing is ethereal.


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Dim Flaxenwick 3 years ago from Great Britain

Not every one ever in their whole lives finds love as you have. I , too am one of the lucky ones. Your words gave me butterflies inside me.

beautiful, so so beautiful.


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Cheeky Girl 3 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Music flies and always seems to be in your poetry, Cathy! Damn and the blog looks damn amazing today! :)

I'll tell you the magazine thing later. XOX


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Vinaya, gosh... what a sweet comment to see in my poem here. It sounds so beautiful and peaceful there. I agree about the feeling of love and longing. The feeling of belonging in someone's life is also special and so beautiful.

Hi Dim, my wonderful amazing poet: I love getting your comments about my writing and my poems. I feel blessed being in a very amazing relationship with such a sweet person like Fehl. Wow, it gave you butterflies inside...? Yes, love and poetry are .. um... a very nice combination. Hehehe. It has that affect on people. It is a wonderful feeling, and even more when the other person feels the same way...

Thank you for this, Dim. Have a sweet day. :)

Hi Cassy Girl: you are so cheeky. Yes, you noticed that. Again. LOL. Can I say I love your comment in the forums earlier? You are awesome as always and fearless and true. Typical cheeky you. LOL. :P

Thank you for loving my blog, seeing as you helped me set it up, back in January. Hehehe. Magazine thing is okay, enough for a few issues... etc. More to you later, honey. Oh, and Fehl is on board. :)


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Cheeky Girl 3 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Aw sheesh! Forum yeah. It's a crazy thing. Erm, the blog is cool, but the pdf thing I will explain again. Nuff said! ;)

Mwah! XO


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you, curly muffin. :)


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girishpuri 3 years ago from NCR , INDIA

Beautifully expressed poem, Cathy. God bless you.


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Cheeky Girl 3 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Hah! Curly muffin! How can I not smile seeing that here? Mwuah! XO


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Girish, thank you for the kind words. :)

Hi Cassy, yes... that cute smile is so good. Hehehe.... :P

Don't be naughty here please. LOL.

XO


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CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

Sweet, oh lucky Fehl! And, all in the name of love.

Beautiful expression!


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi CrisSp, thank you for the nice comment. Yes She is lucky. Hehehe. And I am lucky to be in her life. She is very special. :)


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Jo_Goldsmith11 3 years ago

This is so wonderful! I love poetry, and I love Frank SInatra!

A great work and I was so moved by the tone and words.

Up +++ and shared...thank you for allowing us to enjoy this beautiful work. :-)

Shalom


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you Jo. I have always been a distant fan but maybe I liked him more than I would admit. But some of his songs are just so wonderful. When I heard some of the tunes that he sang in his lifetime, I just became inspired to pen a poem in the manner of a song that Sinatra might possibly sing some day. I know the great man has passed on now, but his music does inspire.

And there is a very amazing person in my life who inspired this poem. Thank you Jo for the comments and the vote up. Have a sweet day.

Cathy


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

I added some new artwork to the hub in the last few days. Thank you to fans, followers and everyone on Pinterest for the pins. You know who you are. :)


Poet American 22 months ago

You have true poetic talent.


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Astra Nomik 14 months ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you American Poet. : )

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