Together We Never Fail

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Together we never fail

our souls are becoming one


This is not a fairy tale

It is something we have done


At New Years Eve

We had a blast


It was time to leave

this would never last


First I played a game

with your lonely heart


Your kiss was not the same

as the one who broke my heart


That same winter night

Your friend kissed me too


I didn't want you to fight

I was leaving the both of you


In my mind you both stayed

As a I flew back again


You were both now betrayed

Was this really sane?


Forgetting was the only thing

that I had on my mind


Until I heard the phone ring

and your voice was so kind


You were coming after me

No, I just said no to you


I wanted to be young and free

and feel a little blue


I was living an exciting life

I'm glad nobody knew


Someone cheated on his wife

Someone to whom I flew


You made me stop right away

by chasing after my soul


There would not be another day

without an empty goal


You became my best friend

and gave meaning to my days


And I would not want to spend

a day without looking at your face


The friend of yours is doing fine

He has everything he wished for


He was not meant to be mine

and is both of our friend for sure


We can not make predictions

about life and its turns


There can be some frictions

but now the love of fire burns


You and me are stronger than ever

and we will never fail


I will love you until forever

by following the right trail


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traslochimilano 4 years ago from USA

Hi Made,

Awesome and absolutely truly poem.

Votes UP. Thanks for sharing it...


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Hi traslochimilano, thank you! Poetry seems to be a good way for me to express my feelings. I'm still searching for the writer in me.


Ghaelach 4 years ago

Morning Made.

Nice poem. Very interesting story within the poem.

I'm not a person that like poems, having said that I have written a couple on HP though.

The way I feel is enhanced by these Japanese "Haiku" poems. I just can't see the sense in writing seven words on three lines and calling that a piece of work/art.

But then isn't it good that we aren't all the same, would be very boring.

Take care Made and have a nice day.

LOL Ghaelach


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Hi Ghaelach, thank you for your honesty. I think I learned to write haiku in school 20 years ago, but haven't done it since then. Maybe I will give it a try some day, but I prefer writing poetry just the way I feel. Diversity is a good thing. I appreciate your comment.


Ghaelach 4 years ago

Hi Made.

Just a little extra note.

As I feel that I spend a long time on research then get my next hub onto paper and sort out which piece goes where, meaning where does it fit. Then it all goes into Open Office where I have a spell checker to help my tipo's. Edit the whole piece and find suitable images for my new hub. When I'm happy I do a split screen with O-O and HP and then transfer or Drag and Drop as they say each section into place in HP.

When I'm finished, have my text and images and checked again the I publish and OLE my new hub.

I then know that I've done a lot of hard work which I can feel good about. Getting people to visit is another story.

Thanks for listening.

LOL Ghaelach

PS. My mother always said I could talk the back legs of a donkey


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Thank you for sharing Ghaleach, and your mother was probably right. :)


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Beautiful Made, simply beautiful! You say you are still searching for the writer in you...I think you are getting very close. Your work is improving right before our eyes. I'm proud to be a follower.


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Bill, my friend, I'm proud to have you as my follower. You always leave kind and supportive comments. Thank you!


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Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

two souls reunited...awesome and amen to that!!


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Thank you Ruchira! Much appreciated. :)


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sligobay 4 years ago from east of the equator

Well done. We can all identify with your poetic character.


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

A lovely poem and interesting story. It's nice that you got back together and found love


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Thank you sligobay!


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Hi Rosemary, all of it isn't really the truth, but at least all ended well. Thank you! :)


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thougtforce 4 years ago from Sweden

This is so beautiful Made, and I like the way your poem tells a story! Voted up, awesome and beautiful!

Tina


KDuBarry03 4 years ago

Very deep, passion, and tells a great story! I agree with thougtforce, awesome and beautiful!


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teaches12345 4 years ago

This is a great poem, true love found a way. We must remember what matters most and avoid the temptation to take second best. Enjoyed the read.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Beautifully done!


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Hi Tina, I always appreciate your comments. I'm glad you liked the poem. Thank you so much for sharing it. :)


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Thank you KDuBarry03. Nice to see new faces around here.


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Hi teaches12345, you're right. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. Thank you!


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Thank you AudreyHowitt! :)


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

What a wonderful poem to read at this hour. Beautiful my friend.

12:30 AM, Kathmandu


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Vinaya, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you my friend! Here in Finland it's 9.50 PM.


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago

Read it to the very end. Life and love, take us on a journey with no end. Your words captivated our senses and we felt your experience. Nice picture Made! Great Piece!

LORD


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Thank you lord de cross. Life really is a journey and we don't have any map. We just follow along. The picture is taken where I live.

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