Tonight Everything Feels Right........

I 've awaited this time of the
day with pure pleasure
The sunsets with a covering
of clouds to scattered to measure

And the red tinge of the sun
coming up from under those clouds
I watch it as if some loving
hands were painting out loud

And before you know it...... cobalt
blue skys and the cool of dark
Watch for the first stars and my friend
Orion aiming for his mark

I wish I could stay out here all night long
until the dawn of a new day
Evenings gift to me for sure
I wouldn't have it any other way

Once I spent the night on a beach as nothern
lights and thunder rolled together
Lighting up the sea ..... the sand.....the
sky and I wished the night was forever







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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

The evening sunset, nothing more beautiful. Thank you.


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dahoglund 5 years ago from Wisconsin Rapids

Nice imagery.


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Heart Felt Book 5 years ago from New York, NY

BEAUTIFUL ! VERY LOVELY And THANKS FOR SHARING This. BLESS


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Hyphenbird 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

"Painting out loud." Now only God can do that. And He does it so well as a gift for you and me and all who will look and love. What a lovely poem ahorseback.


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My Stories 5 years ago

Beautiful work.


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VioletSun 5 years ago from Oregon/ Name: Marie

Aaaah, soothing, sacred-like poetry being read by me before retiring to bed soon. I think it's precious moments like these, when the sky and nature becomes like paintings that helps to reconnect to who we truly are, One all.


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chander mehra 5 years ago from Delhi

Indeed, "loving hands painting our loud"! Wonderful.


daddysgirl 5 years ago

I love those moments of drinking in the beauty that surrounds us all! The sad fact is we don't do this enough. There is beauty all around if we just the time. Gods creation is the most beautiful art ever, and it's free for the taking...love always


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Always exploring , thank you so much ....Just for you!:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Dahoglund , Thanks my friend, Glad to share!..:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Heart Felt Book, Thank you sweety, Glad you came by to share with!:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Thank you Hyphenbird, serenity is the best ! And you're part of it now!:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

My Sories, Glad ou enjoyed! Be well!:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Violet Sun , I can always tell when it's one you will enjoy ....You are a serenity Junkie aren't you! Take care of you!:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Chander , Thank you sir, Nice to share!:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

AHH there's my sweet girl , I love and miss you , How are you feeling , better?.....oxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoDad.


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Alastar Packer 5 years ago from North Carolina

A beautifully vivid description of the coming of eve. Wish I could have joined you for a moment or two under Orion.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Alastar , Nice to see you , something impressive about the universe at night . You can almost actually feel the earth moving ! Thanks for reading. And the comment.


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

Ahorseback, the perfect evening, there is nothing like it.

It's romantic yet sacred.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Cardisa , Yes , There are some things beyond romantic and to me the solitude of natural serenity may just be one of those things. After all the human mind and heart are born and die alone . But then I tend to be a loner as a man. Of course the choice of sharing lifes beauty is another story ! Yearning , peace and contentness are solitary ? But of course You are correct. there is nothing like love , the sunset and the pure bliss of sharing everything!.....Hugs to you pretty lady..:-]

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