Tonight at the brook ....a poem

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I had begun to get lazy for the april days
to end and may to find a way

Today a warmer wind where the last of
april's rain finally did meet may

I sat by the brook contemplating life
love and the universe

And ended up as confused as I had begun
maybe even worse

There's something about fast water though
it has a way of cleansing

Damned if I really didn't need that with
this life commencing

Okay so I have turned sixty and feel as pert
as a rutting buck

I don't quite get it though I never seem to
experience anything but bad luck

I found myself sitting there with natures perfection
surrounding me and yet

I just wasn't tuning in ....or should I say tuning out
but I'm gonna make a bet

As time rolls on I'm going to sit by that stream
more and more and then

As if it were all I needed ....and then some
that stream will finally be my friend


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

Nice poem ahorseback. Seems to be I have been writing similar themes, about Spring and being friends with a river, contemplating life etc. I enjoyed the read.

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jhamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

It is the season for taking walks and enjoying the countryside. Thank you for poetry. Jamie

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ImKarn23 2 years ago

i adore your work - it is YOURS - unique, earthy, real..

I've loved it from the first time i read you - if you recall...

Sharing you rutting buck you..


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ahorseback 2 years ago Author

Karen , you never fail to make me smile ! Tanx sweet lady!

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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

It sounds lovely. Thank you for sharing your poem.

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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

There's something about water that calms and refreshes. lol at Lesley's comment. Hee..

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LaThing 2 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Beautiful! Nature and thinking...... Bound to get lost somewhere :)

Voting up and everything .....

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ahorseback 2 years ago Author

Blossom !Thank YOU , for being here my lady ! ....;-]

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ahorseback 2 years ago Author

Lathing , yes , every single time !....:-}

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