Work so hard [Poem]

Maybe I'm trying to take too much on my shoulders

and sometimes I'm not able to going over;

but I know something: when all of this will be broken

I won't be the one to see the image "Game over".

Almost everybody thinks I'm just a joker

but during my training, I work so hard like a soldier.

This is my law: never give up till it's over

and do your best to demonstrate your power.

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MsDora 3 years ago from The Caribbean

Lorenzo, live by your law especially if it makes you happy. I admire you!


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vocalcoach 3 years ago from Nashville Tn.

A marvelous poem lorenzo. It's so full of motivation!! Voted up, awesome and sharing.


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Yes! God gives us an allotted time here and it's up to us to use it wisely and not waste it. Enjoyed your hub.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

To do what you love, makes a happy camper..More power to you....


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cherylone 3 years ago from Connecticut

Nice way of putting it. I hope others read this so they can gain a new prospective. Great job.

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