Complete and Total Bliss

The touch of your hand like silk on my skin

The passion, the longing, the feeling within

I want you inside me to be filled with your sin

Enrapt in your secrets let the merging begin.


I need you so badly I can't let you go

Your power alone has a grip on my soul

I feel you surround me, I'm never alone

So caught up in you my sanity's gone.


Your sweet caress brings my senses to life

Your breath on my neck, your hand on my thigh

Your touch is so sweet I feel I could die

How my head is spinning, I'm feeling so high!


You come ever closer, let me taste your lips

You caress my breast with your fingertips

My pulse is arising so much my heart skips

You grab me, placing both hands on my hips


I spread my legs slowly to let you in

This very moment, so much more than a friend

Engulfed in ecstasy, enveloped in sin

Shaking with desire, please never end.


Now you take me away to that sweet evil place

Our emotions converging, locked in embrace

You move with such ease, such pleasure, such grace.

Actions so perfect like weaving of lace.


I feel the heat of your body connecting with mine

Beads of sweat now traveling down my spine

The room is spinning and spinning, I'm flying!

To think I finally have you after all this time!


I've never been so utterly filled with bliss

Gritting my teeth, clenching my fists

Engulfed completely in our sexual tryst

Taken away to that loving abyss.


We collapse in each others arms lovingly

I open my eyes but it's hard to see

Even harder to grasp how damned I be

For it is nothing more than a fantasy.


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ralwus 6 years ago

Oh my, this is hot! I'm so sorry it is only fantasy for you. My Crimson and Cover is th real McCoy if you dare to read. This is very well written and I even got a feeling below my belt for you. I need to go wash myself now if you'll excuse me. Then a fag will be appropriate as well. It was good for me too. LOL Dam good! whew!


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BeccaHubbardWoods 6 years ago from Outside your window... Author

I am glad you enjoyed it! I was turned on myself by just writing it! : ) Just stay tuned, I assure you there will be more to come. I now have inspiration...


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XTASIS 6 years ago from The Beginning

Erotic poems I like . This one was great ! cheers !!


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BeccaHubbardWoods 6 years ago from Outside your window... Author

Thank you much, Xtasis. :)


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ragnaworks 6 years ago from USA, West Virginia

A very passionate and erotic poem indeed. I think most people crave a fantasy such as this.


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BeccaHubbardWoods 6 years ago from Outside your window... Author

Thanks ragnaworks. It all started off as a dream... ;)


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Mike Lickteig 6 years ago from Lawrence KS USA

The depth of feeling in your words are amazing! You express your emotions in a very powerful manner. Thank you for sharing this.


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BeccaHubbardWoods 6 years ago from Outside your window... Author

Thank you for reading, Mike! You are too kind. : )


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Cagsil 6 years ago from USA or America

Hey Becca, the poem was great. Sorry to hear it only be fantasy. It was amazing reading you through your words. It makes one want to desire after you, simply from the passion you seek. ;) Thank you for such a great read. :)


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BeccaHubbardWoods 6 years ago from Outside your window... Author

Thanks Cagsil! I'm so glad you liked it. You're words are always so kind and supportive. Very much appreciated! (((Cagsil))) : )


ralwus 6 years ago

OMG you have puckered my belly button and I am all creamy in the middle parts. Hawt! Awesome wonder woman


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BeccaHubbardWoods 6 years ago from Outside your window... Author

haha... strangely enough, this is the second conversation i've had about a belly button with a man of the same name in a single day. your comments are always welcome, CC, and i knew if anyone would enjoy this, it would be you! :D


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writinginalaska 6 years ago from southeast Alaska

Becca this is wonderful, so sensual. The only thing i might say is work on your metering, couple of sentences are a bit choppy but otherwise VERY nice. Reminds me of http://hubpages.com/literature/Hush-me-Now . I have to say the aforementioned piece could have been more erotic but i was afraid Hubpages would censor it. Great job! ;) lvh


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago

Holly goodness gracious! You did great on thst one. Lukcy me didn't read it before writing simmilar inspirations. Superb! job! and thinking of a dark night with brown lips behind me...

LORD

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