Tricks or Treats?... A Thriller Halloween Poem


∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞


Black as a crow, she hid herself

In nightfields sleek and fresh

As Hallow’s Eve would stir such beasts

To sate their hungry flesh;

The porch light hissed as gothic shapes

Of graveyard blood and bone

Would dance amongst the vittle-bags

The treaters claimed their own;

She slid her tongue across her teeth

When children came in view

But waited for that human scent...

The boy she always knew;

Beneath the light the boy appeared

In pumpkin-plump attire…

Her slit-eyes marked the cherub sweet

To eat her heart’s desire;

Her cravings inched her body forth

Through leaves of rustled brown

To slither up the wooden steps

And rise without a sound;

She skulked amidst the candy crocks

And jack-o-lantern stares

In hopes the boy would see her stealth

And blackened nostrils flare;

Past apples covered crispy red

She crept with wily skill

And made the boy her presence known

To quench her hunger still;

He giggle-tossed a candy corn

To waiting claws with glee

And watched his kitten purr-delight

Aha...this one’s for me!




~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

.

Do you prefer tricks, treats, or both at Halloween?

See results without voting

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Best wishes to everyone for a happy and safe Halloween!

Source




© Copyright Genna East . All rights reserved. Said copyright does not extend to the video; Michael Jackson's famous "Thriller" video was created by TheQueen4Music of YouTube.

More by this Author


Comments 66 comments

billybuc profile image

billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

LOL....I'm sure this was great last year and I know it's great this year. Nice job; great fun!


Sunnie Day 4 years ago

Whooooooo...this was devilishly good! Thank you for re-posting...such a fun Halloween poem..very witty!


AudreyHowitt profile image

AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Well I didn't read the original, but am delighted with this one!!! Happy Halloween to you too!


xstatic profile image

xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Outstanding and timely poem. The ending was a wonderful surprise!


kashmir56 profile image

kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Awesome and beautifully written and a Halloween delight this poem was a pleasure to read !

Vote up and more !!!


writer20 profile image

writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

This is a really cute poem for this time of year.

Vote up and really funny, Joyce.


Maya 4 years ago

I’m not late this time Gen. Yah!

Lol! Stephen King meets Beatrix Potter. Your cadence, rhyme and wording are perfect. Loved it!


shiningirisheyes profile image

shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Glad you re-published this as I enjoyed the pleasure of the read.

It reminds me of one of our grumpy neighbors! LOL

Perfect and timeless Halloween read.


b. Malin profile image

b. Malin 4 years ago

Very Cute...and you really had the Hair on my arms standing straight up for a few moments there Genna. Clever, (sighing in relieve) for the Happy, ending.

Maya, is right, a touch of Beatrix Potter Vs. Stephen King. My Votes of Up, Interesting & Awesome are my "Treats" to YOU!


Nell Rose profile image

Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

A great Halloween poem, spooky stuff! lol! I love halloween, its such a shame we don't celebrate it much of here these days, voted up! nell


always exploring profile image

always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Here's hoping you have a fun filled halloween. I intend to go to a party dressed as Scarlette. I am hoping Rhette is there. Cheers my friend


Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Wonderful Halloween poem. Just delightful. It's one of my favorite holidays. Passing this on.


Eiddwen profile image

Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

A great p[oem genna and I especially liked She skulked amidst the candy crocks

And jack-o-lantern stares

In hopes the boy would see her stealth

And blackened nostrils flare;

Enjoy your weekend and here's to so many more by you.

Eddy.


Genna East profile image

Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

@Billybuc

Hi Billy. It was fun to write, too! I love Halloween…I love to watch children enjoying themselves. Thanks for your comments.

Happy Halloween! :-)

@SunnieDay

Hi Kim.

We sometimes get dressed up like gypsies and read trick or treaters their fortunes in a special Halloween center we set up near the front door. The kids love it. When my calico was just a kitten, she snuck up the front steps just like the kitten in this poem; she was so cute!

Have a great day.


Genna East profile image

Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

@AudreyHewitt

Hi there, and I’m glad you enjoyed this poem. Cheers and best wishes. :-)

@xstatic

Good morning! The surprise is like Halloween; there is a young child in each of us, and a positive ending with fun and laughter is part of this holiday. Thanks so much for those nice words.


Genna East profile image

Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

@Kashmir

Hello Kash!

I love to see that adorable avatar…it gives me such a huge smile. Thanks so much for the kind words and votes. Cheers and good wishes.

@Writer 20

Hello Joyce! I love the holiday season, and Halloween starts it off quite well, I think. I’m just an overgrown kid when it comes to the decorations and the goodies for the children. Good to see you and thank you.


Genna East profile image

Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

@Maya

Why thank you! Whenever I rhyme, I always chose a metered rhyme…it’s part of the fun of the poem. Stephen King and Beatrix Potter? Lol; I guess it might be. What a great thing to say. Hugs, my friend.

@shiningirisheyes

Hello! One of your neighbors? Oh my…he or she must be very grumpy. It’s so good to see you. Thanks for those nice comments. My best to you, and a Happy Halloween! :-)


Genna East profile image

Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

@B.Malin

Hi B! :-) I was thinking about all of the spooky feelings about Halloween, and then the entertaining times kids have when we act so scared when answering the door and seeing their scary masks that hide the faces of the children all having fun. Thanks so much for the nice comment and votes.

@Nell Rose

Thank you! The number of children in our neighborhood seems to have decreased a little over the years, but we still get more than a hundred coming to our door each year. It’s a holiday I love, but, then again, I love this entire holiday season. Have a great weekend, Nell!


Genna East profile image

Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

@AlwaysExploring

Hi Ruby. Scarlett O’Hara – what fun! Rhett will be there…I just know it! Have fun, my friend, and thanks so much for the great comments. It’s always so good to see you.

@GypsyRoseLee

Good morning! Thanks, and I’m glad you had fun reading this, and thank you for passing it on. It’s one of my favorite holidays too. :-)


Genna East profile image

Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

@Eiddweden

Hello Eddy! That’s one of my favorites, too. I am happy you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the visit and great comments. Happy Halloween! :-)


unknown spy profile image

unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

your poem is always wonderful..any topic you write really amazes me.


DnWW 4 years ago

Dear Lady; republish all you want. I liked the metaphor about the stealthy creature stalking the boy out of hunger. It turns out to be a kitten, young and innocent like the trick or treaters that dress in hobgoblin disguise for boos and goodies. This is what Halloween is all about. Excellent write, my lady.


Vincent Moore 4 years ago

This is a wonderful poem Genna. I so much love it and grin each time I have the pleasure to read it. You are so talented my friend and I am delighted with your style. A perfect poem for Halloween and sure to stir the spirits who wander on that night. Bravo, voted UP and shared.


KoffeeKlatch Gals profile image

KoffeeKlatch Gals 4 years ago from Sunny Florida

Your poem is wonderful. I loved the way it started out so spooky and ended up so playful. Get job. Up, awesome, funny.


arb profile image

arb 4 years ago from oregon

So glad I caught this, this time around and glad to see your poetry. Loved the images, the classic rhyme and meter. Truth is Genna, I just love your poetry.


mckbirdbks profile image

mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Even in a lighthearted Halloween poem, your turn of phrase jumps from the page. This is a treat for sure.


Nellieanna profile image

Nellieanna 4 years ago from TEXAS

Oh, Genna - this is so charming and fun to read! I missed it last Halloween but wouldn't have minded finding it again; - - it merits repeating. Your style is simply flawless!! It gets my votes across the board!

You really have me thinking! Last year I wrote a Halloween story. That was exciting to do.

But maybe I'll republish my Halloween poem from 2010. You give me courage to consider it. Though mine is sinister and evil, it's a bit out of character. I tiptoe into the untried territory! hehe.

I've never republished a hub and have no idea how. Any clues for a novice in it?


Genna East profile image

Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

My apologies for being late in responding, but my computer has been down for a few days.

@unknown

Hi there, and what a nice thing to say – thank you!

@DnWW

Hi Dana. Thank you for spotting the metaphor; it was a fun write. My best to Molly.

@Vincent Moore

Hello Vincent. Many thanks for those words that are praise indeed coming from one of my favorite and most talented poets. Hugs, dear Vincent!

@KoffeeKlatch

Hi! Spooky is good as long as here’s a happy ending. Thank you for the visit and votes. :-)


Genna East profile image

Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

@arb

Hello Alan! I like classic rhyme and meter at times, and I thought Halloween might be a nice fit for this style of poetry. I’m so pleased you enjoyed this. Thank you. As always, it’s great to see you.

@Mckbirdbooks

Hello Mike. Oh good – I’m happy to hear that it jumps from the page…what a nice thing to say! Thanks so much for the comments! Cheers and beset wishes for a Happy Halloween! :-)

@Nellieanna

Hi there. What I always loved about Halloween was reading all of the children’s Halloween poetry and “boo!” stories when I was a little girl…the scarier the better, but I liked happy endings. I like classic meter and rhyme at times…it's fun.

Tiptoeing into the untried is so much fun, Nell. I’d love to read your story! This was my first try at republishing, but it goes something like this:

First, you unpublish the original; then copy it to a new hub, then publish the new hub. If you don’t follow these steps, they (THTB at HP) will yank it, and unceremoniously I might add, with a note saying that it is a duplicate published hub. Good luck and thanks for those kind words. :-)


Nellieanna profile image

Nellieanna 4 years ago from TEXAS

Aha! Thank you! That makes sense - - well, sense as far as keeping in tune with THTB (and I love that acronym!). And really, it's not all that much trouble to undo and then redo. Is it necessary to wait the 24 hours or whatever it is for the unpublished old one to be actually fully removed from one's statistics list before republishing it? And will the same title 'fly' or does it need to be changed?

I tiptoe to avoid jumping into deep and unforgiving chasms. But I do like untried territories! :-)

My story is pretty much an open book - but with scattered pages. It comes out spontaneously in hubs and even in comments, when it's inspired by the other person's referrals to his/hers. There is just so MUCH of it. All my many years have been 'chock-full', as they say. Thank you. You are such a dear!


Nellieanna profile image

Nellieanna 4 years ago from TEXAS

BTW - I also have loved good scary stories! The themes I like are those that are just a bit mysterious, suspenseful and ominous, but - as you say - that turn out happy or at least, 'all's well that ends well'. My Halloween story-hub is like that.

I must admit, though, that what has always been the scariest to me is those stories involving believable actual people who are just evil and cruel. Some of the fictional ones, I just have to turn off. But real 'live' news at times qualifies for that!


Genna East profile image

Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

Hi Nellieanna…

You don’t have to wait for any length of time before un-publishing, then copying the content to a new hub and publishing the new hub. I’m not sure about the title to the hub…I changed mine just to be on the safe side.

I understand about the tiptoeing for I do this, too. Well, most of the time. And I so agree about happy endings with Halloween poetry. As far as real evil and cruelty are concerned, one needs only to turn on the news, and voila! It’s right there. It’s so depressing. Anywho, I look forward to reading your story. :-)

Oops – before I forget. How do you copy your beautiful art work and flowers, etc., to your hubs? I’ve never figured out how to do this.

Have a great day. :-)


molometer profile image

molometer 4 years ago

I must have missed this one last year, thanks for reposting. Very chilly and funny, I like the flow of this poem.

I can't believe the year has gone around already. Where did it go?


Genna East profile image

Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

Thank you. I so agree -- where did this year go? I had fun writing this poem, and am pleased you enjoyed it.


CHRiso 4 years ago

Excellent poetry Genna!


Genna East profile image

Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

Rizz! Good to see you, and thanks for the patience in reading this. :-)


AudreyHowitt profile image

AudreyHowitt 3 years ago from California

I so love this piece Genna--and I am wanting the seasons to fall upon me---


Genna East profile image

Genna East 3 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

Thank you, Audrey. I await the change as well...the "Falling" is upon us.


thelyricwriter profile image

thelyricwriter 3 years ago from West Virginia

Genna, perfectly written! I loved this, such a cute and funny poem. Voted up and all across, shared on Facebook. Describes Halloween spot on.


Genna East profile image

Genna East 3 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

Thank you, Lyric. I had fun writing this one. :-)


Minnetonka Twin profile image

Minnetonka Twin 3 years ago from Minnesota

I'm like a kid when it comes to Halloween and this poem is right up my alley. You really got me at the end. I was ready for the little boy to get eaten. Great rhythm and a magical poem for Halloween. Were actually carving our pumpkins today and then I make my traditional baked pumpkin seeds. Happy almost Halloween Genna-BOO!


Vincent Moore 3 years ago

This wonderful poem has to be bumped to the top again, its important to have available to READ over and over, it's a brilliant poem on the subject of Halloween, a magical scary event that not only children delight in but so do us adults, heck we were all kids once;-) Thank you Genna for penning this enjoyable poem. Happy Halloween dear poet.


mckbirdbks profile image

mckbirdbks 3 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

I am glad Vincent's comment led me back to this Halloween 'thriller'. Timely and just the same delight as the first presentation.


tillsontitan profile image

tillsontitan 3 years ago from New York

A Halloween Evergreen Genna. So imaginative, a bit creepy and a great twist at the end! I can imagine a group of kids sitting around getting scared and thrilled by this brilliant Halloween poem!

Voted up, useful, awesome, interesting, pinned, and shared.


Pamela Kinnaird W profile image

Pamela Kinnaird W 3 years ago from Maui and Arizona

So good! And delightful. Voting way up.


Frank Atanacio profile image

Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

bringing back old posts..what a great idea :)


Laura Schneider profile image

Laura Schneider 3 years ago from Minneapolis-St. Paul, Minnesota, USA

Excellent and suspenseful fun. A great poem for the season and a novel perspective your main character has, too! Alas, it had to come to an end--the spell you wove over those of us unsuspecting readers--in order to reveal the trick in the poem. Awesome job and great timing and rhythm, too! More, please!!! I'll be following...


Genna East profile image

Genna East 3 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

@Minnetonka Twin

Hi. Thank you for that wonderful comment that is in the true spirit of Halloween. We are also getting ready for the big day…it is great fun – for both adults and children. And a happy “Boo” back to you. :)

@Vincent Moore

It is always such a pleasure to see you, Vincent. I agree in that this holiday can be great fun for both adults and their children. Creative “tricks AND treats” is what it is truly all about, which is what I tried to convey in the poem, in the spirit of Halloween. I “spotlighted” this poem from a year ago in time for this year’s celebration. Thank you for those kind and thoughtful words. Hugs.

@Mckbirdbks

Hi Mike. It is good to see you and Vincent commenting here in time for this year’s festivities. Halloween is not only such fun, it marks the beginning of the holiday season in the spirit of giving. I had fun writing this poem, and even more delight in seeing some of my favorite hubbers pay a visit. Thank you.

@Tillsontitan

Hello Mary. Oh…thank you! I hope it was creepy…it was intended to be imaginative and scary with a fun and lighthearted twist at the end – just like Halloween. Your encouraging comment means a lot to this writer. :-)


Genna East profile image

Genna East 3 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

@Pamela Kinnaird W

Hi Pam. Why thank you! I am pleased you found this to be delightful. I appreciate your visit, comment and vote. Have a Happy Halloween!

@Frank Atanacio

Hi Frank. I didn’t republish, but put this one in the “spotlight” box in time for this year’s festivities. Thanks for the visit, and the comment. I hope you have a fun Halloween. :-)

@LauraSchneider

Hi Laura. What a thoughtful comment – thank you! :-) We have fun during this holiday, and always do something special for the neighborhood children and their parents. This year, the theme is from “Thriller.” (Last year, it was the Adams Family.) The kids always enjoy themselves and the parents love it as well, so I’m looking forward to it. I enjoy writing in rhyme, and am pleased you had fun with this little spooky poem with a Halloween twist. Good to see you. Happy Halloween.


pstraubie48 profile image

pstraubie48 2 years ago from sunny Florida

What fun this is to read and I know to reread. In my youth we went in packs from house to house after the Halloween party at the local elementary school. In my tiny town no trick or treaters come to my house. It is almost unheard of any more..as the town sponsors a party and the kids go there. Kind of sad actually I think...thanks for the great read Genna

Many Angels are on the way to you.. ++++ and shared ps


Genna East profile image

Genna East 2 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

Thank you...I had so much fun writing this. Halloween is one of my favorite holidays. I agree in that the loss of trick or treaters is a tittle sad; it's such a wonderful tradition. Good to see you. :-)


ocfireflies profile image

ocfireflies 2 years ago from North Carolina

Genna,

I must have missed this one, but how wonderful it is to find it now--especially with the spooks waiting in the eaves. THIS IS AN AWESOME POEM! You had me all the way to the end. A definite thumbs up and share. Thank You for making me smile.

Best,

Kim


suzettenaples profile image

suzettenaples 2 years ago from Taos, NM

What a great Halloween poem! I loved the rhyme and rhythm of this poem. You cleverly built up the suspense and really had me going and then the cute twist at the end. This is so creative and I enjoyed reading it. Voted up+ and shared!


Genna East profile image

Genna East 2 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

@Ocfireflies and Suzettenaples

Thank you, Kim and Suzette. I had great fun writing this one, which is what Halloween is truly all about. With all of the costumes and ghostly "boos," appearances and realities are rarely the same. Happy Halloween! :-)


Suhail and my dog profile image

Suhail and my dog 2 years ago from Mississauga, ON

OK, the beginning verses ran shivers down my spine. I was thinking that I should put of my plan of going out hiking with K2 after midnight, but the ending verses brought me back.

This is fun, creativity, originality, and timeliness at its peak!


Genna East profile image

Genna East 2 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

Lol. Well, I'm glad you changed you mind. Thanks so much for that nice comment...this was fun to write. I hope you are enjoying your weekend.


Jodah profile image

Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

Wow, what a great Halloween poem Genna. I hadn't read this before..but I picked the right time. It starts off downright scary and had me on the edge of my seat imagining what was going to happen to the boy...you got me...just his pet kitty cat..agh! Well written, great rhyme and rhythm...loved it. I wish I had written this myself. I was considering writing a Halloween poem, but couldn't compare to this one. Voted up.


Genna East profile image

Genna East 2 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

Hi John. What a generous thing to say -- that is perhaps the nicest comment I could have ever hoped for. Thank you! Your talents as a poet are wonderful...I'm quite sure you will create a great Halloween poem, John. :-) I'm behind in my comments, but will be over to visit very soon.


PegCole17 profile image

PegCole17 2 years ago from Dallas, Texas

Oh, so clever and haunting, this All Hallows' eve poem and with a sneaky twist at the end, too. Wonderful imagery and cadence. I loved it.


Genna East profile image

Genna East 2 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

Thank you, Peg. This was so much fun to write. I would never have let anything happen to that little boy, so I decided to tell the story from the kitten's POV. Good to see you.


cam8510 profile image

cam8510 2 years ago from Columbus, Georgia until the end of November 2016.

It seems this one gets pulled out every year. Glad I finally got to enjoy it. Thanks for the trick.


tobusiness profile image

tobusiness 2 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

A cautionary tale. This beautifully written poem should be required reading to little trick or treaters everywhere on the night before Halloween. Perfectly scary.


jhamann profile image

jhamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

I love me a good Halloween poem! Thank you and a Happy Halloween from my family to yours. Jamie


Genna East profile image

Genna East 2 years ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

@Cam8510: Lol...yes, this is part of my recycling. :-) I'm glad you enjoyed this tricky poem. Have a great weekend!

@Tobusiness: Hi Jo. Thank you. I would never have allowed anything to happen to that little boy. Actually, my cat, Miss Callie, was the inspiration. And the fact that part of the fun of Halloween is that appearances and reality are rarely slices from the same pie. Good to see you.

@Jhamann Thank you! And to you and your family as well.


PegCole17 profile image

PegCole17 13 months ago from Dallas, Texas

This time of year has come around so quickly again. I read this one again with delight and surprise. Scary and delightful at the same time.


Genna East profile image

Genna East 13 months ago from Massachusetts, USA Author

Hi Peg. Thank you; I had so much fun writing this poem. I hope your Halloween was filled with fun and delights.

    Sign in or sign up and post using a HubPages Network account.

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    No HTML is allowed in comments, but URLs will be hyperlinked. Comments are not for promoting your articles or other sites.


    Click to Rate This Article
    working