TROUBLED THOUGHTS PAGE7

#7 ( " DECISIONS " )

Sitt'n here contimplat'n on the next step

I'm supposed to take, Yet my mind won't stop

anticipat'n, on who's being real and who's being

fake, It's messed-up liv'n life by two decisions,

gett'n killed or doing life in prison, there's really

no point in stress'n going in circles with no direction,

they think behind bars will teach me a lesson,

all that does is build more aggression, lucky

I don't have a Smith & Wesson the crimes

I'd commit would only have you quess'n!

So I guess I'll finish this freestyle by say'n

I'll see you guy's in awhile!

WRITTEN BY: Ricardo Hernandez

What inspired you to write this?

Living behind bars is not the life for me!

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Mike Lickteig 6 years ago from Lawrence KS USA

A very interesting work. The anger and resignation are tangible. Thanks for sharing this.

Mike


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generalbrat 6 years ago from california,usa Author

MIKE I GLAD YOU LIKE IT THIS ONE IS A VERY TRUE TROUBLED THOUGHT!


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generalbrat 5 years ago from california,usa Author

saleensblog- thanks for the sweet words


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

your dad was quite the talent. Love the language in this poem. Voted up!


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generalbrat 5 years ago from california,usa Author

thanks PDXKaraokeguy! I m glad many have enjoyed it.

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