Turn around slowly

Remember me for I will remember you

 Turn around slowly and try to see a glimpse

of where I was standing when we had our first dance

turn every so softly or you just might miss

that very first day we had our very first kiss

you were watching and waiting to see  

if I felt the same way and were we meant to be?

The laughter we shared and smiles along the way

 and the beautiful music ..that we once made

please try and rememeber all the good that we felt

for one another and our own self.

  For no one can ever take that from us

The lesson of love and to blindly trust

Trust your heart and it will lead

even if it leads away from me

 

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downpourofwords 5 years ago from Dallas, Texas, USA

Loved reading this. very true.

Those moments - no one can steal,

Sometimes i wonder if they were for real,

I wanna live those again for a while,

Hell yeah on my pensive face, I gotta get back a smile

------Downpourofwords.

Voted up. keep writing.


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Momma Mia 5 years ago from North Carolina Author

Thanks so much Downpourofwords, I Appreciate you stoppiing by and to read my little jots of thought. I will be checking your writings out as well.

Take great care of yourself and those you care greatly for!

wishingUwell

Mia


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tlpoague 5 years ago from USA

Beautiful poem! To remember a love so true...Voted up! Loved it!


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Momma Mia 5 years ago from North Carolina Author

Hello and thankyou very much tlpoague. always happy to see you drop into my lil world!

Hope You have a great holiday weekender!

always

wishingUwell

Mia


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ahorseback 5 years ago

Ohh , especially the last line , The saddest part of all relationships , someone once said "if you are lucky you can count your friends on ine hand" That is so true . Often times I think even less. Nice poem and a great messege.


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Momma Mia 5 years ago from North Carolina Author

Hey there ahorseback ! Yes indeed very sad , however the lessons learned help fulfill a new and improved self and to make our next relationship be more than it would have been otherwise. Thankyou for reading and your insightful comments!

always

wishingUwell

Mia


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Amy Becherer 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

You express, so well, what so many of us feel, Momma Mia. Very wistful, soulful words that celebrate the experience of what once was. Although, it's not always possible to sustain love, such an experience is never wasted. You manage to validate it's value for a journey you'd not turn away from. Love it.


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Momma Mia 5 years ago from North Carolina Author

Thanks so much for such a great compliment and comment Amy. The experience and the emotions are very much what I am all about, so nice that you notice that about me.

Happy Holiday Weekend

wishingUwell

Mia


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50 Caliber 5 years ago from Arizona

Mia, an awesomely, beautiful expression of the way we should focus our hearts to lost love. Remembering what was so right, allows the baggage one carries down the road to be light. It gives an easy transition of how we interact and handle our next chance that might result in "death do us part" happy all along the way, voted up, Peace and Love, dust


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Momma Mia 5 years ago from North Carolina Author

Thanks Dusty... yes indeed remembering is always a great thing....especially at my age...lol... So great to hear from you .....take great care

Peace out Dust,

Mia


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The Minstrel 5 years ago from Hawaii

MommaMia

Thank you for your poem that really captures that experience so well. Voted up! Big time!


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Momma Mia 5 years ago from North Carolina Author

Thankyou so much The Minstrel for reading, vote up and your kind comment! Hope you are having a great weekend!

wishingUwell

Mia


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Yeshuan 5 years ago from North Carolina

This is truly you being you. Keep it up.


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Momma Mia 5 years ago from North Carolina Author

Thankyou very much Yeshuan. I appreciate you taking the time to read my lil rhymes.

Happy 4th Holiday

always,

Mia


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ImYoungAtHeart 5 years ago from midwest US

very heartfelt poem


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Momma Mia 5 years ago from North Carolina Author

Thankyou for reading imyoungatheart

Hope you are having a simply perfect week!

wishingUwell

Mia


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epigramman 5 years ago

...fabulous writer you are ....and I'm so glad I found you ......


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Momma Mia 5 years ago from North Carolina Author

Very happy we found each other epi-man! For not to have this chance to interchange an exchange our work...would be a much wasted of precious time an energy. Thank you.. you have made my whole day

wishing the best

and well

Mia


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brandyBachmann 5 years ago

Great words!


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Momma Mia 5 years ago from North Carolina Author

Thank you much Brandy ..so appreciate you reading and stopping by.

wishingUwell

Mia

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