The Colored Skyy

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Aspiration for contentment

Striving just for the cure

My written word, powerless

Against action's finesse

Her craft is her own

But her inspiration

Lies within me

Captivating and corrupt

Cultivating a false light

To guide us through

The darkest of truths


~~~


Like a drug

As a pill

Increasing my want

With the passage of time

And my wasted breath

Her flesh quivers

Her skin responds

As receptors of touch

And feeling ignite

At my will

Imposition of my instincts

Transform her desire


~~~


My muscles cannot react

My restraint gives way

To her soft eyes

Fully, to her beauty

Lost, I become

Paralyzed beneath her

Rendered helpless

In carefree caress

Necessary roughness

Inflicted gently

For good measure

The wounds dance

Across my back

Lingering, to display

Our guilty pleasures

Carried out freely

Lacking only

In guilt


~~~



© copyright Ben D.A 2011


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Either I am totally perverted or...it's really erotic. LOL Please don't hit me, ya? =) Hot hot hot. Yep. And I stand by my words. =) Ben, I love it!


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Stephiliboo 5 years ago from Liverpool, United Kingdom

Welcome!!!


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

thanks steph! :P


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Stephiliboo 5 years ago from Liverpool, United Kingdom

......Amazing.. and The Tones to top it off (My fave)!!!... It can't get any better! Period.


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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

Lost, I become

Paralyzed beneath her

Rendered helpless

In carefree caress

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I agree with Nikkij504gurl, they do need a sexy button.

Wonderfully done, Ben. :)


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

voted up and awesome. they need a sexy button. :)


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

agreeeeed


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Twilight Lawns 5 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

My philosophy as expressed in almost everything I write and think and do is, "Nothing is as it may appear".


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

thanks Ian, and yes, light and dark, false and true...they're all kinda the same thing, in my book haha


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Twilight Lawns 5 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

"Cultivating a false light

To guide us through

The darkest of truths"

These lines hit me in the stomach... especially the last. We believe that truth is Sweetness and Light, but you are right. Truth can be a dark and claustrophobic thing. Not very pleasant at all.


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

thank you cardisa :] and yeah I like that picture too


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

Whoa Ben!

Hot, Hot, Hot. That's all I have to say!

BTW, I like this profile pic the best!


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

uriel, you've been such an encouragement for me in my writing, thanks for all your lovely visits :]


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Uriel 5 years ago from Lebanon

i will tell you , something is igniting here and its your poetry :D:D glad to have stopped by :D at the middle of the poem i started seeing receptors, neurons, and electric impulses. i don't know why maybe it was the world receptors that triggered the flow of old biology material that i studied in school :D:D always so profound and strong with your poem, totally loved it :D

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