Twinkle Twinkle In My Eye

Twinkle, twinkle in my eye

Up above the starry sky

I wish upon a star tonight

Burn little star burn so bright

I wish upon your yellow glow

In the dark you sure do show

The beauty you reflect and carry

Leaving to dance the Midnight Fairy

Dancing beneath the heavenly moon

The midnight curtain will close real soon

Hurry up and please come true

The wish I spoke and told to you

I close my eyes and think real hard

Hoping my wish with an asterisk starred

There she goes and extends her wings

Hoping my wishes I wished she brings

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makusr 5 years ago from India


Greetings from MAKUSR. You've simply excelled yourself and written a superb hub. Voted awesome!

Lots of Love,


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Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

I love the new twist in the rhyme that I loved as a kid. I also loved the easy flow and uniformity of composition. You have a wonderful poetic craft.

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Mak, Thank you very much. This one although very easy to read took me a few days to complete. smiles :)

Vin, Thank you yes a bit easy not to complicated with an easy flow as you say. THank you again.

smiles :)


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SubRon7 5 years ago from eastern North Dakota

Lovely poem, Bella, a departure, though, from your usual, I really liked it.

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Sub, A little different I do suppose but never hurts to be different once in a while... Right??

smiles :)


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jfay2011 5 years ago

i like this one. cool picture of that eye. I love photography

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

jfay, Thank you I do too I wish I knew how to photograph professionally.


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

I often do that. One of my favorite songs is "I'm wishing on a star, to find out where you are. I'm wishing on a dream to follow what it means....."

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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very nice Bella!! I liked it.....

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writer20 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

wonderful poem loved it. up/awesome

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mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Bella this is very nice. A beautiful thought.

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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Very nice Bella. Hope all your wishes come true

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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

very nice dreamed into and forgot while reading the entire world and entered into an amazing lovely world...

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Car twisting our fave, are always fun putting our own meaning and heart into it thanks for stopping by. hugs

Always, Thank you very much

writer, THank you very kindly as always!!

Birdie, Thank you very much :)

Rose, I hope so too I made to many this birthday!!

Money, thank hun I am glad I was able to send you off into wish land with me :D

smiles :)


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

This is beautiful bella, voting up.

JadedLove 5 years ago

When I close my eyes it is the thinking that kills me. When I read another's words, it's like salt in my wounds or honey on my tongue. The way feelings are felt or tears are cried, I have found smiles and tears with your words. You Bella, have a gift. Thank you.

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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

aww loved this. like a little prayer. i like your virgin of twinkle twinkle little star(eye) better.

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Hear Me 5 years ago from Somewhere in Florida

Wonderful. I love the lyrical nature of this piece.

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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI

Well, first off I really like my fairies so I'm glad you mentioned them. Another is that the skill you have, the imagery. Just pure talent. Loved it. Voted up.

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