Two Hearts that beat as one - Poem

Two Hearts Beating as One


Two hearts together

Beating as one

Two hearts entwined

With a love so strong


Two hearts that share

Each other's joy

Two hearts to ease

Each other's sorrow


Two hearts that know

Each other's thoughts

Two hearts that hear

The other's call


© Rosemary Sadler 2011

Phil Collins - Two Hearts

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homesteadbound 5 years ago from Texas

This was truly a beautiful poem, and a wonderful description of two hearts becoming one.


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Love is a beautiful thing. Loved your poem.


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writer20 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

Great poem full of emotions, love it. Voted up awesome and beautiful.


Sunnie Day 5 years ago

Beautiful Rosemary,

Two hearts beating as one...lovely thoughts..Hope you are having a great day..Staying warm..

Love,

Sunnie


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zzron 5 years ago from Houston, TX.

Very beautiful and heartfelt. What a lovely way to feel about the most special person in your life. I believe my wife and I have the very same feeling.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Wow... here's me trying to find the right video to add and come back to find all these comments


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi homesteadbound

Thank you for your lovely comment. Hope you come back to listen to the video


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Thank you Susan

Pleased you enjoyed it


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Thank you Susan

Pleased you enjoyed it


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Thank you writer20

I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Thank you for the vote


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

A beautiful spring day here Sunnie so beautiful thoughts to go with it... :-)

Thank you, you stay warm


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi zzron

That is such a lovely thing, that you and your wife have the same feeling. I am so pleased for you.

Thank you for coming by


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Hyphenbird 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

Being a romantic I can enjoy this poem. Being a single lady I can say I am happy that you have found such love. May it last forever and ever.


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jfay2011 5 years ago

What a beautiful and heartfelt poem of love. Thanks for sharing.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi jfay

Thank you for coming to read, I am pleased you liked it

Take care


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Morning Hyphen

Thank you for the lovely comment and the wish. Don't lose hope... one day you will find someone special when least expected to share the rest of your life with.


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Becky Katz 5 years ago from Hereford, AZ

Beautiful poem, Rosemary.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Thank you Becky I am pleased you liked it

Thank you for coming by

Take care


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WD Curry 111 5 years ago from Space Coast

My ex-wives all feel that way about their young boyfriends.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Haha Just how many ex-wives do you have.

I call my partner my 'Toy boy' he is 6 months younger than I.


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mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Hello Rosemary. Sounds like a beautiful Spring song, filled with sentiment. went up and voted up, etc


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mary615 5 years ago from Florida

Another sweet poem from your pen!


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi Mike

Yes spring is in the air over here, although I only sing in the shower Lol

Thank you for the vote


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Thank you mary. I am pleased you enjoyed it.

Thank you for reading


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makusr 5 years ago from India

Rosemay50, Only one who has a heart to know the joy of others finds the joy for oneself. Beautiful poem and I vote it as so. Thanks.

With warm wishes,

MAKUSR


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

and i can feel the heartbeats of the two hearts here that beat as one...simply beautiful Rosemay...i can see that you have a gentle heart...


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WD Curry 111 5 years ago from Space Coast

Only a few. I shouldn't have said anything. Theirs are younger. The alimony all went for the prom, or Junior Chamber of Commerce dues.


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Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

Love unifies two souls. Very lovely composition.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi Makusr

You have left a beautiful comment

Thank you for the vote

Take care


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi Raciniwa

I am happy that my poem made you feel this way. Thank you for the lovely compliment

Take care


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

WD Curry

You could always offer to babysit their boyfriends for them. Lol. Now how much an hour would that be.

Take care


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi Vinaya

It durely does.I am pleased you liked it.

Thank you

Take care


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prashantpujan 5 years ago from Mumbai, India

beautiful....


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi prashantpujan nice to meet you. Thank you for the visit.


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MartieCoetser 5 years ago from South Africa

Rosemary, this poem made me think.... Of all the men I loved before. My heart is still connected to theirs. When they call I still share their joys and sorrows...Of course merely as an independent friend. But this was just a second thought.

The message of this poem of yours is clear and touching. Voted up and thought-provoking.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi Martie

Yes a little of our hearts are still with those we have loved in the past. It is good that you still can be friends with them and share with them. Once two hearts are connected they remain connected always.

Thank you for leaving such an understanding comment and for the vote


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MartieCoetser 5 years ago from South Africa

Rosemary, I must say there is only one punk I never want to hear a word from again - a con-artist sociopath who entered my heart with a ridiculous lie in 2010: 'His wife had committed suicide while he was in the culprit preaching.' His lies and false behavior are still beyond my comprehensive.

As for the rest as well as their spouses/girlfriends - we are true friends who know each other and understand the reasons why we had to break. And of course our wish for each other is all the happiness in the world.

Now don't get the impression they were that many. I can count them on the fingers of one hand, including the ridiculous punk.

But back to your poem. It is wonderful when two hearts beat together and so very sad when they are forced out of rhythm by one or the other unbearable reality. If I allow myself, I will treasure the 'what could have been' instead of the 'what was good and wonderful'. I prefer to treasure the latter.

This poem of yours really gave wings to my thoughts about connected hearts. Thanks!


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Thanks for coming Back Martie

Well my first husband was violent, my second was a sociopath, a real control freak who went out of his way to put me down and hurt mein every way he could, he was also violent and I put up with him for far too long because of the children. And the other man in my life died in a car accident. the latter is the only one with a special place in my heart. That is of course apart from my current partner who is wonderful.

We are certainly opening up some doors between your hub and mine.

Thank you


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia

Votes up Rosemay. Quite the poem, beautiful and special. Love is great and this reminds me of those first meetings of love. Butterflies still in the stomach, all nervous and such. Love is special in so many ways. Great work Rosemay. Take care.


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very lovely Rosemary...


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drbj 5 years ago from south Florida

Beautiful and tender poem, Rosemary, with the perfect Phil Collins song to accompany it. Thank you.

BTW, give my regards to the 'boy toy.' Every woman should have one!


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi Ricky

What a lovely comment to greet my day

I totally agree, true love is wonderful, even those butterflies.

I always look forward to your comments.

Thank you and take care


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Pleased you enjoyed it Ruby

Thank you for coming by


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi drbj

I love to see you on my hubs, You always make me smile.

It wasn't easy finding a nice phil Collins video, they all seemed to have way too long introductions.

Thank you and take care.

The 'boy toy' sends his good wishes

The


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Ardie 5 years ago from Neverland

Such a sweet little poem :)


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Thank you Ardie.

I was just thinking about you last night and thinking its time I paid a vist and see what you are up to Lol So on my way


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snakeslane 5 years ago from Canada

Ooo la la Rosemay, love is in the air, how lovely. Regards, snakeslane


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Ooo la la... you make me laugh Snakes.


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Truckstop Sally 5 years ago

No matter how old we are or how many relationships we have enjoyed/endured, thelyricswriter is correct, those first meetings of love.

Butterflies still in the stomach, all nervous and such. Love is special in so many ways.

Thanks for sharing!


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Yes Sally you and TLW are both right, even those we endured started out with butterflies.

A facy I try to deny, thank you for the reminder.

Take care


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Hi I loved this one,so tender and beautiful.

Take care my dear friend.

Eddy.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Thank you Eddy

I thought you might like this one.

Have a lovely day my friend


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

you're welcome...you're a great writer...


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PegCole17 5 years ago from Dallas, Texas

Your poem is not only beautiful but true. Smiles.


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brandasaur 5 years ago from Planet X

Really two hearts became as one when you're in-love in each others arms =)

A very well said poem.


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

A beautiful poem rosemay, thank you for sharing and voted up.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi Raciniwa. You are a great writer yourself.

Thank you for coming back


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Morning Peg, I am glad you know this, I can see that glint in your smile.

Thank you


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi brandasaur nice to meet you

Two people in love can read each other so well and know what the other person is feeling, their hearts are surely connected.

Thank you, I am pleased you enjoyed it


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Morning MM thank you for the vote I am pleased you enjoyed it.


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brandasaur 5 years ago from Planet X

Voted up :)


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mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Hello Rosemay - there is an awful lot of heart beating going on in thie corner of the world.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Thank you brandasaur

I will be popping along to read your hubs shortly


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hello Mike. Could you hear it? I didn't realise we were so loud.


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mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Oh man, I think the Pacific is heating up. Hope everyone brought ice tea. lol


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Haha. I'll be popping into the cafe for my iced tea. Lol


Harsheen K. 5 years ago

Short and Beautiful :)


Harsheen K. 5 years ago

Short and Beautiful :)


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Thank you Harsheen. It's a long while since I've seen you, I must pay you a visit too.

Thank you for dropping in


Sueswan 5 years ago

Hi Rosemay

What a beautiful sound, two hearts beating as one.

Voted up, up and away!

Have a good day.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi Sue

Pleased you liked that sound

Thanks for voting

Take care


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mljdgulley354 5 years ago

Beautiful poem and the video is great with it.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi mljdgulley354

Thank you for taking the time to visit and comment.

I'm pleased you liked the poem and the video, it is a lovely song


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Heart-warming 'hearts' poem =) Love it so much, it is so tender and sweet, so loving!


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi Max

It is wonderful to share love with someone who knows what you are thinking before you think it.

Thank you for popping in. Looking forward to reading your next hub


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

Beautiful and such a stunning choice of song by Phil Collins - awesome!


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Ah acaetnna this was right up your street :)

I love that song too.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

Ohhhh so romantic and sooo beautiful Rosemay! ^;^


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand Author

Hi Spy I'm just a big romantic at heart, I see you are too :). Pleased you enjoyed this

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