Undefeated

This is a simple, basic, one-word verse poem describing the life of a man refusing to be defeated. All the words are in "-ed" form, telling the story of what life has "done" to this man, and what he has done in return- and will undoubtedly do in the future.

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*I'm not an expert on poetry, and I don't even know if this qualifies as a poem, but I feel like I was able to tell a compelling story using only 1 word per verse. Come to think of it, this leaves the story open to your own interpretation and your own self-visualization.

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Doctrinated

Cultivated

Irrigated

Regulated

Understated

Mast…(anyways)

…Liberated



Devastated

Mutilated

Suffocated

Lacerated

Aeromed-ed

Resuscitated

Cast(er)ated….hardly



Medicated

Reconstructed

Redirected

Aggravated

God provided

Motivated

“Destinated”



Re-Destructed

Hell Accosted

Un-persuaded

Unabated

Undefended

Unprotected

Evil hovered

Fear descended

Grace reliev-ed

Un-dissuaded

Un-succeeded


!

Undefeated

!


Now Enrag-ed

Re-devoted

Damn decided

Heaven-fated

Salivated

Dedicated

Formulated

Masterminded….no, servant-minded

Meditated

Locked and loaded



Underrated

Relegated

Pride remov-ed

Complicated

Under-funded

Un-befreinded

Disrespected

Irritated

Frust(er)ated



Un-deterr-ed

Un-reserv-ed

Surely bless-ed

Demonstrated

Instigated

Prophesied

Capacitated

Forward-minded

Heaven-minded



Vindicated

Emulated

Imitated

Serenaded

Levitated

Celebrated

Elevated

Un-exceeded

!

Undefeated

!

!

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