Unequalled Love - Original Sad Poem


In my room, besides my bed

They’ll find many pages, crumbled to death

I was often found with a pen, blank pages

And thoughts of you

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There is a garden seldom blossoms


A pair of flowers never happy


They miss their happiness, sunshine,


blooming petals and the scent of you.


In between the dawn and the twilight

Your memories illuminating the half-light

Is a sight to witness, when gather;

A river, some pebbles and dreams of you.


Perfect, flawless and serene

Matchless and ideal that have always been

Though lacking and missing now

Some cuddles, hugs, kisses and you.

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We are not together,


Courtesy of an unequalled love


The only things that are left behind now


Some paints, a canvas, your face and me.

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Lucky Cats 5 years ago from The beautiful Napa Valley, California

Oh, ouch! this one hurts. I hope it is only a poem and not a lament for lost love. Very compelling.


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Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan. Author

@Lucky Cats: It is just a poem and not a lament :P

It is such a privilege that many a times, people ask me the same questions. I am starting to feel a bit more proudy :P lol.

Thank you so much for your comment :)


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writer20 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

Great lovely poem you have written here and I'm happy to read that is only a poem.


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apurva joshi 5 years ago from INDIA

beautifully written. awesome work...


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homesteadbound 5 years ago from Texas

It was a touching poem. I am truly gald to read that is only a poem, and not a true lament of a love lost with all the pain that would bring.


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Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan. Author

@Writer 20: Thank you for stopping by and giving a feedback :) I am glad that you liked it :)


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Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan. Author

@Apruva: Thank you, so sweet of you :)


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Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan. Author

@homesteadbound: Thank you so much for the kind words :)

Although, for me, it is just a poem; for many people it could be a true lament of a love lost and they could relate to it. I hope everybody live with peace and love.


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

A sweet lovely poem. Adorable is the word. Voted awesome


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Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan. Author

@ubanichijioke: Thank you so much for your kind words. A comment of appreciation from such a beautiful poet as you, is indeed an honour for me.


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Paradise7 5 years ago from Upstate New York

It is a lovely poem, full of artistry and yearning. Somehow those two things go together.


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Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan. Author

@Paradise7: Thank you so much, I am glad that you loved another of my poem :)


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

A beautiful poem.

The only things that are left behind now

Some paints, a canvas, your face and me.

These words convey so much. I too am pleased it is only a poem.


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Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan. Author

@Rosemay50: Thank you so much for stopping by and conveying your appreciations to me. I am glad that you liked my poem :)


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

It's a lovely poem and I too am glad it's only a poem.

Great writing, thank you.


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Deborah-Diane 5 years ago from Orange County, California

Lovely, lovely poem. I'm glad HubPages provides an opportunity to read poetry like yours.


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Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan. Author

Thank you Deborah-Diane. Your kind words made my day :)


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kaynelson 5 years ago

this is very well written. great job!


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Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan. Author

@Kaynelson: Thank you for stopping by and providing me your feed back. Really appreciate your comments :)


lostwithinmyself 5 years ago

Very well written. X


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Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan. Author

@lostwithinmyself: Thank you :)


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Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

Crumbled pages, blank pages: these two images caught my attention. Good writing.


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homesteadbound 5 years ago from Texas

This was really great! It left a lump in my throat. I liked the phrases you used: crumbled to death,the scent of you, and then your last line "The only things that are left behind now Some paints, a canvas, your face and me." This last line was the summation of loss that the lover felt, such sadness, grief, loss, and emptiness - having to accept the finality of their fate.


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Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan. Author

@Homesteadbound: You are very few of those fellow hubbers who really judge a hub on its merit and goes deep inside to find the actual meaning of those words and phrases and that is why I really adore you. Thank you so much for being a wonderful part of my writing journey. :)


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uzma shaheen 4 years ago from Lahore,Pakistan

"We are not together,

Courtesy of an unequalled love

The only things that are left behind now

Some paints, a canvas, your face and me."

awsome lines..I am speechless.


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Hunbbel Meer 4 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan. Author

@Uzma: I am really glad that you liked it.


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Daisy Mariposa 4 years ago from Orange County (Southern California)

Hunbbel,

The imagery created by the words in your poem is beautiful. The photographs you included were perfect. I enjoyed reading this very much.


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Sunshine625 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

Awwww too sweet! Beautiful words and photos!! This poem has my votes!:)


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WD Curry 111 4 years ago from Space Coast

This is a beautiful poem with wonderful, pertinent images and a sophisticated layout with decorative devices. Nice!

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